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loreen77 | 2011.10.20 - 08:59PM | 1: | Signed |
Poor hg and poor sev. New marriages are hard enough without extrenal stresses.
Author's Response: I know :( thanks for your review! |
magicalpresence | 2011.10.20 - 07:24PM | 1: | Signed |
Aw :( What a sad chapter. I loved the part about the 'woohoo'ing bubbles haha. I can imagine Severus enjoyed removing THAT tap!!
I'm so sad for Hermione, and even sadder for Severus. She's trying to not cause him any inconvenience, or show him up at all. She's trying so hard to be strong and she doesn't know that he wants her to confide in him. I think as far as she knows, he's done what he needs to do and she doesn't want to burden him further.
I hope that they sort this out soon - I'd love to see Severus stand up for Hermione, that'd be awesome.
Well done! A good chapter, but update soon because it's breaking my heart already!!
Author's Response: I am pleased you totally understand the emotional confusion, it is only going to get more complex I am afraid! Next chapter by the end of next week! |
loreen77 | 2011.10.19 - 11:39PM | 1: | Signed |
You continue to write with a realistic feel. Well done.
Author's Response: How lovely! Thank you very much |
loreen77 | 2011.10.19 - 11:25PM | 1: | Signed |
Nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you! xx |
loreen77 | 2011.10.19 - 11:02PM | 1: | Signed |
Elegant and lovely nuptuals. I am glad the wedding was planned for a happy future instead of wallowing in angst about the situation.
Author's Response: Exactly! Hermione never did strike me as the "doom and gloom" type. Next chapter by the end of next week! |
loreen77 | 2011.10.19 - 10:00PM | 1: | Signed |
Poor girl, still breaks my heart to read her despair.
Author's Response: Thank you! Sadly, things are going to get worse before they get better! Next chapter by the end of next week! |
loreen77 | 2011.10.19 - 09:40PM | 1: | Signed |
I have read this before but missed reviewing the first chapter.....so i will rectify that. Excellent start. Very gripping anf raw. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Next chapter by the end of next week! |
angelbaby69 | 2011.10.19 - 04:17AM | 1: | Signed |
So glad to see a new chapter, even an angsty one, life is pain and to have them live happily ever after without some obstacles would not be realistic, so well done, I loved the whole chapter. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: More angst and complexity to follow! Next chapter by the end of next week! |
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