Reviews for Living On Borrowed Time
| Severessa | 2004.02.21 - 09:50PM | 1: For I Obey Your Will, But With More Ease Could Die | Anonymous |
| Please, there HAS to be a sequel to this story. It's too perfect to just leave like this! |
| franflutewitch | 2004.02.21 - 02:48PM | 1: For I Obey Your Will, But With More Ease Could Die | Anonymous |
| The END?, It seams to me like the prologue of a wonderful story...
Please, don't stop there. |
| lisa aka lord snapes lady | 2004.02.21 - 02:46PM | 1: For I Obey Your Will, But With More Ease Could Die | Anonymous |
| hey!i read your fic from a rec on wiktt I just want to say it is a really well written fic and you HAVE to write a sequel it left me wanting more!well done an an ace story though hope you write more! |
| Deb | 2004.02.21 - 12:46PM | 1: For I Obey Your Will, But With More Ease Could Die | Anonymous |
| What a wonderful, succinct story! Now that you've whetted our appetite, I hope that you will write a sequel, soon!! |
| heartnut | 2004.02.21 - 11:03AM | 1: For I Obey Your Will, But With More Ease Could Die | Signed |
| Oh, wow. This is intriguing. I have no idea how the next part of the story will go, but this is a nice little chapter of a much longer story, I think. Perhaps you could write more about the "5 rows" that they've had over the three years? |
| Rosmerta | 2004.02.21 - 10:52AM | 1: For I Obey Your Will, But With More Ease Could Die | Anonymous |
| Oh wow, great story! You MUST write a sequel! |
| Calliandra | 2004.02.21 - 10:00AM | 1: For I Obey Your Will, But With More Ease Could Die | Anonymous |
| A great ficlet! But it needs to be longer; as well as a sequel, there seemed to be some parts missing from the fic.
Perhaps you should have shown a scene where Severus was waiting to die, switching between the last fight with Voldemort (where Hermione knows when Severus will die) and that, counting down or something. Just a suggestion; it's a great fic nonethless, and I am looking forward to more (hint hint) |
| Amber Snape | 2004.02.21 - 08:53AM | 1: For I Obey Your Will, But With More Ease Could Die | Signed |
| 6am and I am already crying. What a way to start a day. I agree with other reviewers, I WANT MORE!!! How dare you think you can get away with writing this as a one shot. Here is your basic outline. Chap 2 he thinks of a solution, Ch3 he works it out and administers it, ch4 she wakes, ch5 the wedding. There!! Now GO WRITE IT!!!!!! |
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