Reviews for Living On Borrowed Time
June W | 2005.01.13 - 03:35AM | 6: Harm's Our Delight And Mischief All Our Skill | Anonymous |
I just love those two Slytherins! Lawrence and Isadora do indeed know what their Head of House would do, and perhaps they'll end up looking for him on their own. Go, Slytherins!! Thanks for the new chapter. |
droxy | 2005.01.09 - 12:47PM | 5: Peace And I Are Strangers Grown | Signed |
great update. like the OC here. good interworking dialog |
VSG | 2005.01.04 - 07:19PM | 5: Peace And I Are Strangers Grown | Signed |
i really do enjoy this story. I think you are doing a great job with the characters and creating a certain mistery around hermione/severus relationship before everything happened, where they friends? just good collegues? why did hermione do what she did?
Really, I can't wait for you to update in order to find the answers. |
JustJeanette | 2005.01.04 - 06:54PM | 5: Peace And I Are Strangers Grown | Signed |
What a wonderful chapter. |
kirien | 2005.01.04 - 06:43PM | 2: And Silence Their Mourning With Vows Of Returning | Signed |
Nice to see Ron Weasley as the voice of reason. It actually makes more (creepy) sense that Harry would "go berk" about Hermione's situation. Very interesting premise (thank goodness, not another MLC). I will read on to see how you have Severus somehow bring Hermione back. |
Snape Fan | 2005.01.04 - 08:55AM | 5: Peace And I Are Strangers Grown | Signed |
I certainly hope Caradoc regrets how he treated Severus and helps him for his own sake and not Hermione's. |
LariLee | 2005.01.04 - 06:13AM | 5: Peace And I Are Strangers Grown | Signed |
Man, this seems like an impossible task! Very nicely done! ~Lisa |
Avenging Platypus | 2004.11.10 - 11:54PM | 4: How Thunder Rends The Mountain Oaks A Sunder | Anonymous |
It's a nice idea, and all--the plot, I mean--but none of the canon characters are... well, much like the canon characters. I can't for an instant swallow that Harry *or* Ron would talk the way they do in this story (very, very stiffly), and I don't have any sense of Hermione or Snape as themselves -- they're just characters with those names stuck on them, it seems like. I mean, again, I like the story, but the characters just flat out aren't interesting here. The only character that does show some promise, really, is Isodora--I'd like to read more about her--but it's not enough to counterbalance the emptiness of everyone else. |
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