Reviews for Domination
joan_glover | 2013.06.07 - 09:02AM | 1: Domination | Signed |
Since it has been almost two years since you posted "Domination," I assume it has moved to the category of a one-shot, and an intriguing one-shot at that. When you assigned dominance play and mind manipulation to the Dark Arts, I think you made an implicit negative value judgment about these sexual activities. You left the door open wide enough to let me decide for myself whether these activities are "wrong, " and I hope readers younger than I am also feel as though they can decide for themselves as well. Please let me encourage you to continue writing.
Author's Response: This story was always meant as a one-shot. To write out everything that leads up to this moment would be more than a novel-length fic, and not something I currently can pursue. I think I gave enough hints to figure out the basic jist of why they are where they are.
As for the BDSM, I don't really see it in negative terms. In this case, it is just their coping mechanism. |
Tangerine Dream | 2011.07.18 - 05:07PM | 1: Domination | Signed |
Wonderful story! Very powerful and erotic! I would love to read more! |
deedeebug95 | 2011.07.08 - 12:23PM | 1: Domination | Signed |
Well written and believable,I love D/s aspect of their personality types. I would love to see more of this story! Severus is the perfect Dom. IMO , and there are too few good stories of the Lifsestye written, more please!!! |
liezbeth | 2011.06.28 - 02:49PM | 1: Domination | Signed |
anyone who has ever experienced a powerfull DS scene and the inevitable crash afterward would identify with that story. it was wonderfull |
greenwood | 2011.06.27 - 05:38PM | 1: Domination | Signed |
Great pace and keeps us a bit in the dark. Very well done. |
Kittens | 2011.06.25 - 03:35PM | 1: Domination | Signed |
I almost identify with the story. D/s is probably one of the few releases while living in a rather hyped vanilla world. The culmination of two people who play both roles and are well matched in chemistry is just....amazing. |
kerriblu | 2011.06.25 - 01:39PM | 1: Domination | Signed |
I liked it so much. Tightly written, nice balance of sex and psychology. More please. |
Logbrandur | 2011.06.25 - 08:10AM | 1: Domination | Signed |
Very impressive start!
I hope you're going to tell us what happened, why Minerva knows and how they came upon the idea to control themselves with BDSM. |
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