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Jensteed2015.03.17 - 09:55PM7: 7/7: Epilogue – Three and a Half Years LaterSigned
I think I'm just going to have to do the rounds on all your stories (...again) I can't just read one, it's a physical impossibility! I do so love stories that start with just that perfect amount of darkness and despair, especially when it ends as beautifully as this did. It's not one where you expect a happy ending so it's all the better for blindsiding you like this. For me, it's when he's commanding, cajoling, begging her not to orgasm that speaks of his mind being so close to snapping. Going through such a spectrum of emotions and desires within moments, not understanding his own deeply hidden want of her warring with the implanted hatred as it drives him insane. That when she does he nearly reaches breaking point. It's the strongest moment in the whole piece for me, his consuming rage that we don't understand in the slightest, yet. Poor Severus and poor Hermione, they both go through such hell together when they should have been safest with each other. Damn you Malfoy! But he got what was coming to him. As always, your writing is breathtaking and you bring each of them to life with your words. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm just blow away by your eloquence and your lovely comments. This story was given to me by my Muse, and I just had to trust him and keep writing, even though I sometimes didn't quite understand it myself! But reading your comments was so gratifying - you got exactly what I was trying to do. Poor Stgulik - she was so traumatised by the first chapter she refused to beta it - I think she eventually read it years later! LOL Seriously, thank you for your beautifully written review. It truly warmed my heart.

Jensteed2014.07.03 - 12:08AM7: 7/7: Epilogue – Three and a Half Years LaterSigned
I can't put into words how incredible this story is, it was soulrending and full of agony to begin before morphing into such love and gentleness. I am truly awed at the skill and feeling you must have poured into it. Thank you so much for the opportunity to read it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words, and for giving this fic a try. I realise it is a bit intense, and not an easy read at times, but I hope in the end you enjoyed it!

hgelman2014.03.23 - 03:26AM7: 7/7: Epilogue – Three and a Half Years LaterSigned
I'm so glad your muse made you write the epilogue! I am a greedy girl - I always want more, more, more! This was a really well done story. Interesting and engaging. I thank you so much, once again, for sharing your considerable talent with us mere mortals!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a lovely comment! It is my privilege to write for you! I am so grateful you gave my dark tale a try and stayed with it!

Loyd19572014.02.24 - 04:16PM7: 7/7: Epilogue – Three and a Half Years LaterSigned
I am not sure how old this story is, but I just found it and almost wept that it was over when I read it. Even with your warnings, I found a raw truth about war. But this was more about betrayal and misunderstandings. Very, very well done. It moved from such a horrendous beginning, of which I thought nothing good can come of this, to a wonderfully light hearted ending. Thank you so much.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for giving this story a try! It's a couple of years old, and one that isn't everyone's cup of tea. I really appreciate you staying with it, to find the truth of it. I hope I portrayed it as realistically as I could.

Chantal2014.02.13 - 10:47AM7: 7/7: Epilogue – Three and a Half Years LaterSigned
What a brilliant story!!! You hooked me with the hint of mystery in your initial comments and as the turning point of their escape from Wizarding Britain came around, I was so worried where you were taking this lost couple! All that happened from there was such a pleasure to read. I know the beginning is difficult to read, but it's part of the authenticity of the story and I admire that (plus, you showed great integrity and respect for your readers with your warnings at the beginning of each chapter). You are one of my favorite writers (that's how I happened upon this tale). I hope you continue to write...I am happy to sacrifice some sleeping hours to read your work! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for giving this story a try. I cannot tell you how much I appreciate you taking the time not only to read, but to comment with such encouraging feedback. I means more to me than I can say.

mexicantt2013.08.14 - 11:42PM7: 7/7: Epilogue – Three and a Half Years LaterSigned
I have to say - when I was reading the first few chapters, I didn't see any possible way that you could make me want them together. Of course, that didn't stop my reading; I've read quite a few SSHG stories where they don't get together in the end, and rightly so. But you convinced me. It was sad. So sad at some points. But I love what you did with them, how much time it took, how confused their feelings were until they both realized nothing would change being in love and they were finally able to move on, and eventually do so together. I loved this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I realise this was a very difficult story at times to read (my beta stgulik has never read it for that reason), but I appreciate so much that you gave it a try and kept going and were happy with the way it ended. Thank you for your amazing comments.

hot_stuff112013.04.18 - 04:44AM7: 7/7: Epilogue – Three and a Half Years LaterSigned
I....can't even...so awesome..just...can't. There are no words. I'm SOOOOO glad you did this epilogue. I laughed, and cried, and now I'm beside myself, wondering what I'm going to do with the rest of my life. How can I keep writing after reading this? It's too amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Believe me, there are times when I read something and think, this is what I want to do - this is how I want to write. And hopefully, that inspiration is enough to keep me trying. Your words have touched me more than I can say, and I feel through this story that I've made a friend, which, in the end, is really what I hope to do with all my fics. Thank you.

hot_stuff112013.04.18 - 04:24AM6: 6/7: The Guilt of AtonementSigned
This is genius. Your Muse truly didn't let you down. The unique curse, and the way in which you give us its back story, explains everything, including why Severus became mentally unhinged. Using Malfoy's Slytherin inability to fathom that Severus actually admired Hermione deep down was also a good call, because it plays on JKR's oft-repeated theme that the different Houses are often unable to see past their own strengths. The dialogue between Severus and Lucius during their confrontation was chilling, and kept me on the edge of my seat as I waited for Severus to snap. I expected him to use the spell on Lucius, but I just wasn't sure when, and you kept me guessing. Carving the words in his forehead with the dagger was a nice, albeit gruesome, touch!

Author's Response: Thank you - this was the part I was truly worried about - I understood the explanation in my head, but I wasn't sure I had conveyed the information correctly, yet not bored the reader into a coma trying to explain myself. Yes, I do think Severus can be one mean sombitch when properly motivated.

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