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Reviews for I Want That One

Half_Blood_Princess_Farah2012.03.25 - 05:46AM7: 7/7: Epilogue – Three and a Half Years LaterSigned
That was just amazing! Beautiful! Especially the scene where he dropped on his knees and hugged her waist. Then dropped to the floor and kissed her feet... That was just... Ther's no appropriate words! You're an amazing auther, I would defently check your other fictions =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you will enjoy my other stories as well. Thank you for the kind comments!

Jong_Kahn2012.03.08 - 04:52AM7: 7/7: Epilogue – Three and a Half Years LaterSigned
Well done. You made it believable. I am glad I got to read it all at once. This way I only hated the whole package and you during those really hard chapters; I got to the relief of finding out the truth within hours rather than weeks or months. (Thank God!) You have quite an imagination, to come up with the entire premise, the whole story. I realize the whole “Such a good girl… oh, baby, are you going to come on Daddy’s cock?” was a wink and nod to your own 'thing'. I do respect that; nevertheless, for those of us not into it, it added a strangely paedophilic note to the very end, which I know you didn't intend. Anyway, well-written story; thanks for all your hard work.

Author's Response: Well, it is what it is. I always feel a little guity for saying it, but this story was a lot more fun to write that to be read. Sometimes there is a darkness in yourself you have to acknowledge, and this was it for me. As for the paedophilia, it is only paedophilia if one is having sex with someone underage, which is something neither I nor my characters are into in any degree. It is a man caught up in making love to his pregnant wife, and many of us have said things in the throes of passion that we blush over afterward. Thank you for sticking with the story and giving it a try - many have not, including stgulik, my beta, who just couldn't get past the first two chapters, bless her. I am always thrilled when a reader gives it a chance, knowing that, in the end, there is the knowledge that the truth will set them free.

Jong_Kahn2012.03.08 - 04:20AM6: 6/7: The Guilt of AtonementSigned
Glad the story's already done; I would have been too frantic following this one as a WIP. Glad that Severus was able to do unto Lucius as it had been done unto him. Too late to save him and Hermione, though--or the entire Wizarding world, alas.

Author's Response: You can see why I put a buttload of warnings on it....

Jong_Kahn2012.03.08 - 03:16AM5: 5/7: The Pendulum of MemorySigned
Well, okay. So the sick asshole motherfucker is really Malfoy, no surprise. Severus' remorse is real. I only wonder what's going to happen now.

Author's Response: ;)

Jong_Kahn2012.03.08 - 03:00AM4: 4/7: RevelationsSigned
"...could revere if he could ever forgive her." Pathological rage = blame the victim. Okay, so the dynamics changed then, I got that. I still don't think anything healthy can come of all this, even if they do happen to outsmart Malfoy &/or Voldemort.

Author's Response: ;)

Jong_Kahn2012.03.08 - 02:48AM3: 3/7: ExperimentsSigned
I didn't read this at all last year because of your warnings. I hate him treating Hermione like this. I hate her being in this situation. The only reason I continue is the reviews of the last chapter give me a hope there will be a way out of this somehow. Till then, I think he's a sick asshole motherfucker, and if I were Hermione in this situation I would die trying to kill him and/or myself.

Author's Response: I know - Stockholm Syndrome's a bitch...

Fwomnomnom2011.12.12 - 04:00AM7: 7/7: Epilogue – Three and a Half Years LaterSigned
I can't help but appreciate how well spun this story was. It started out dark and seemingly impossible to me for anything romantic to come from their actions. But towards and in the end, I find myself in a way satisfied with how you ended this magnificent story. Much thanks for writing this because I greatly appreciate having had the time to read this.

Author's Response: I really appreciate you giving my dark story a read. I know not many felt comfortable with it, but I always love it when someone gives it a chance. It was a strange premise, but I found if I was patient, the happy ever after would come. I just needed for them to find it, and somehow it became sort of a 'thank you' to the reader for given the story a chance. Thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate it.

ksmaith2011.11.17 - 04:50AM7: 7/7: Epilogue – Three and a Half Years LaterSigned
Good story written in elegant, literate prose! Suspense, violence, and sex, but also profound psychological and spiritual insight and blessed redemption. Very well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for giving this story a try. I realise it is a bit hard reading at first, but I am always thrilled when someone gives it a try and finds they like it. Thank you!

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