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Reviews for I Want That One

scribbler7142011.05.12 - 10:28PM2: 2/7: Liquid LustSigned
Wow, you don't pull any punches, do you? This wrung me out, but I couldn't stop reading. And there definitely seems to be something a bit off in the whole situation. Well, besides the whole situation itself. It will be interesting to see where it goes next!

Author's Response: Thank you for giving it a chance! I was afraid I'd be shot down in flames (hence the mile-long warning note), but everyone here is approaching this with such an amazing attitude and that real "wow, this is a mystery" vibe - I'm just so thrilled that you're enjoying it, and hopefully I will be able to make it worth it!

siage2011.05.12 - 08:31PM2: 2/7: Liquid LustSigned
Hmm, at first I stayed away, listening to your warning. Now that I'm reading, I agree with some other reviewers, all is not as it appears. Something is causing him to act in a conflicted manner. Hopefully, the glimpses of the kinder side are the real Snape. Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Thank you for giving it a try - it is dark, but you are right - all is not as it seems... I appreciate you soldiering on.

severus492011.05.12 - 05:16PM2: 2/7: Liquid LustSigned
It's wrong and dark and disturbing, but it's almost like he's trying too hard - to be too mean, and there's something telling, some 'clue' in him kissing her after he cums. I don't know where this is leading, but I hope he doesn't kill her in the process...

Author's Response: The clues are there, but you don't have all of them yet... hee hee....I love this part ;) Thank you for reading!!

PILKY2011.05.12 - 04:16PM2: 2/7: Liquid LustSigned
Well all I can say is - Bloody Brilliant! What a talent you have for painting a picture (granted a horrible one). There are only a handful of writers that I think - wow I wish I could write like that, you are definitely one of them!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! There are some writers that I say that about as well, so it is very gratifying that you would think that about me! I hope you will continue to *ahem* enjoy this dark little story!

ANNABELLE622011.05.12 - 04:04PM1: 1/7: The Night of ScreamsSigned
very good start thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Maria2011.05.12 - 01:51PM2: 2/7: Liquid LustSigned
Very dark, but superbly written. Clues....hmmm. The only one I see is that he's uncomfortable with sexual references (the stutter) and sexual acts. But why give her a lust potion? Is his house being watched? Is this all a pretense? Can't be entirely - he's too perfectly cruel. But again, is he trying to tell her that if she's obedient, she'll be protected? Too early to tell, but I'm intrigued.

Author's Response: Thank you - you are seeing all the clues... I think you're on the right track....but I would say that, wouldn't I? Mwuhahaha!! Seriously, thank you for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it!

Foul Ole Ron2011.05.12 - 05:59AM1: 1/7: The Night of ScreamsSigned
Like the other reviewers, I love a good dark fic. I'm looking out for the clues.. :) Update soon please!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading - I hope you will continue to enjoy it as the story unfolds...

aliciana2011.05.12 - 05:39AM2: 2/7: Liquid LustSigned
Phew, Teddy! Contrary to your earlier misgivings I AM enjoying (is that the right word?) this very much.I mean I am reading it with a cushion in front of my face like one watches Dr Who but I can take it. So all is not as it seems......I wonder what that means? Fortunately I've never been in an abusive relationship but I've often wondered how women (and yes I know it can happen to men too) function with their other half presumably outside of the abusive moments or when discussing them with other people. Perhaps that's the point....that the abuse is neverending. Let's hope that Hermione can cope but I must admit at this tick of the clock I can't see a happy outcome for both/either of them. Cheers me dear for brilliant, engaging writing as always. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.

Author's Response: Thank you, Ali, for giving it a go! I wanted to make it very clear that all is not sweetness and light, but you must take all you know about me, and about these characters as I see them...the breadcrumbs are there to follow...will update soon!

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