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Reviews for I Want That One

NotSly2011.05.29 - 01:22PM6: 6/7: The Guilt of AtonementSigned
I'm really, really enjoying this. And it's not as "deeply dark" as you might think. The best part is, there's a rational reason for Snape's behavior. I've read lots of dark fics where Snape's evil "just because" and the plot doesn't go anywhere. This one has a good focus.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your insightful review; I'm very happy that you have enjoyed it. Re the dire warnings: I originally wrote this for my friends on Live Journal, and they were adamant that I should err on the side of caution with my warnings, so that's why I really laid it on a bit thick. I don't think of it so much as a dark fic either; I regard it more as a mystery. I have always thought Severus was a character of motivation and intent, so I wanted to portray him that way here. Thank you for your kind words, and I'm glad I was able to express the characters' motives clearly.

MollysSister2011.05.27 - 11:10PM6: 6/7: The Guilt of AtonementSigned
ZOMG chilling the way SS left LM. Also ironic that he used the same spell on him. I am so appreciative that you showed us readers what happened between them that day in Cantabury. I got goose bumps when SS observed that history would show him as the one who betrayed HP and HG was right there. Its so true. The battle to overturn Riddle is not theirs. I want them to have a go at making it work between them. The fact that SS has begged for forgiveness, well that is a step in the right direction. They are both a mess at the moment. I would think some professional counseling would be just the thing. I hope they can scoot out of England clean. ((fingers crossed))

Author's Response: Well, there is the epilogue...it might shed some light... ;)

la petite mule2011.05.27 - 07:11PM6: 6/7: The Guilt of AtonementSigned
OMG ! I've read chapters 1 to 6 in one go. First, I've cried my eyes out et now I'm on the edge : will they survive or will they be caught and killed by the dark side ? Your warnings are accurate, it's really a hard story. My poor marshmallowed heart wishes for the best for our favorite pairing... Thank you ! Thank you ! Dear author, you're amazing and always surprising.

Author's Response: Thank you so much - first for being brave and giving the story a read. I know it was not easy, but I'm glad you gave it a try. Thank you so much for your encouragement and your kind words - you make my heart sing! I hope to be able to soothe your mashmallowed heart soon.

madeleone2011.05.27 - 12:17PM6: 6/7: The Guilt of AtonementSigned
Sad and rather ironic that what Lucius did to instigate Voldemort's victory was in reality done in friendship as a means to protect Severus from The Dark Lord's wrath and in gratitude to repay him for protecting Draco. Too bad it couldn't have happened as Severus said: “You should have let the game play until its logical conclusion, Lucius. We have innocent blood on our hands.” But then of course it would have been a different story entirely. :)

Author's Response: Poor Severus....the story of his life.... ;)

madeleone2011.05.27 - 11:43AM5: 5/7: The Pendulum of MemorySigned
Ahhh... the twisted threads of the past are beginning to unravel. Now he's beginning see what really happened.

Author's Response: It's not a pretty picture, is it? ;)

madeleone2011.05.27 - 11:17AM4: 4/7: RevelationsSigned
I am so glad you posted this here, it is getting a much broader readership than merely on LJ. Which it very much deserves!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for being so supportive. It means the world to me, madeleone!

madeleone2011.05.27 - 10:53AM3: 3/7: ExperimentsSigned
Love the added back story and details, I think it much better prepares us for what is to come. I am still horrified by the final scene, that Hermione is forced to come to him as Lily is just so wrong.

Author's Response: Well, he did say he wanted to make her not want him...

madeleone2011.05.27 - 10:37AM2: 2/7: Liquid LustSigned
Even though I've read it before, it still tugs at the heartstings. Poor Hermione! :(

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading it again. I have ended up being very proud of this warped and twisted little fic!

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