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Reviews for Joy Comes In The Mourning

ALANRICKMANFAN212011.04.15 - 08:35AM1: Joy Comes In The MourningSigned
how did snape become a vampire in this story? was he one while they were in school?

Author's Response: I'm not sure - the Muse didn't tell me that part.

ALANRICKMANFAN212011.04.15 - 08:28AM1: Joy Comes In The MourningSigned
was the killer snape?

Author's Response: Well, he killed Rubens!

MzSnape2011.04.14 - 09:57PM1: Joy Comes In The MourningSigned
Well done. Unlike any other vamp fic I've encountered.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

Elou2011.04.14 - 12:58PM1: Joy Comes In The MourningSigned
What a tasty morsel you have gifted us with. Dark, and intensely erotic. Lovely, indeed. I look forward to another...bite. Bwahaha! Thank you again for sharing~Elou

Author's Response: Elou, thank you - I am planning on expanding this dark little drabble to about 5K words soon. Thank you for reading!

JIMBOPAT2011.04.14 - 09:12AM1: Joy Comes In The MourningSigned
VERY GOOD START. I HAVE ONLY READ A FEW VAMP SNAPE THAT I REALLY ENJOY, AND THIS ALREADY RANKS IN THE "TOP 2". KEEP IT UP AND IT'LL BE #1. THE EMOTIONS THEY SHOW ARE SUPERBLY DONE. LOVE THE CHARACTERS AS YOU HAVE PORTRAYED THEM. HOOKED ME ALREADY!

Author's Response: Jimbo, actually this was a completed drabble series, but I am planning on doing a redux with about 5K words very soon, just to give some richer details. I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

dulcemaria4132011.04.13 - 06:49PM1: Joy Comes In The MourningSigned
As always, you have taken my breath away. Amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much - it is my pleasure to do so...

Jong_Kahn2011.04.12 - 02:00PM1: Joy Comes In The MourningSigned
Ordinarily I'm wary of Vampire Snape, but you've done a believable job with yours. I'm actually looking forward to reading more. Thank you for this.

Author's Response: Thank you, Jong! I am expanding this story to a one-shot of longer length, because I'm having so much fun with it. I hope you will enjoy it, too.

severus492011.04.12 - 09:54AM1: Joy Comes In The MourningSigned
I wanted to make an addendum to my original review, because there are some really fantastic parts in this drabble that I wanted to let you know I appreciated. I like the fact that you actually have Hermione eating peaches and chocolate after turning. Every Vamp fic ever written has them not eating because food is life-sustaining and they're dead so they don't need it. But what if they do? What if there's food they still crave? What if there's food they still enjoy eating? Why not? Great, great idea. And I love the part that Severus lets her drink from him. I remember seeing a Vamp movie like that years ago (was it Frank Langella's Dracula?) and I thought that was one of the most erotic things ever. So much better having the male be the hunter and letting the female depend on him for nourishment (I'm probably one of the FEW women under 45 that thinks men SHOULD take care of women, and that women should be comfortable enough in their Goddess status to let them.) The lines where you wrote that Severus was rocking Hermione like a child as she ate, as she turned... beautiful! It's a parental instinct that might never have been seen in aliveSnape, but it comes out so gracefully and naturally in VampSnape and it shows deep, deep love for Hermione and how he intends to cherish her. That idea was incredibly deep to read, and made a huge impact on me. Lovely reading, Teddy!

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! this is the type of review writers raise their hands to the heavens for. I am often worried that my strange little mind concocts these things and people will say - okay, that's just too weird for me, but so very often I am just transported to realise that not only do readers 'get me', but they like me as well. thank yo so much. I am slowly expanding this, and pushing the themes you mentioned to give them greater depth, and I hope you will enjoy that as well. thank you again for making my day, Severus49!

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