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Reviews for Visiting Hours

Loyd19572011.03.27 - 02:40PM1: Visiting HoursSigned
Your muse was in the mood to play with us with that little twist at the end. It did hurt my heart to know he had to leave her every Sunday as she wailed his name.

Author's Response: Yes, DMuse is usually a HEA man all the way, but for some reason he felt I needed to write some heart-wrenching angst. I confess I don't know why...

scribbler7142011.03.27 - 01:01PM1: Visiting HoursSigned
Ahhh, good one. I loved the whole thing and the flip at the end made it even better. What on earth did she do?

Author's Response: I don't know...My Muse just wanted me to write that, and that's all he gave me....

ANNABELLE622011.03.27 - 12:34PM1: Visiting HoursSigned
ahhhaaa you almost had me ,it is sad .this could be a great start humm but i love it thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

ClayPotter2011.03.27 - 12:21PM1: Visiting HoursSigned
Gut wrenchingly sad. And the twist in the end -- brilliant! Hermione is the one locked up. Could a prequel and/or sequel be in the making?

Author's Response: Thank you! At this time, this was all the Muse gave me for this fic, but I never say never where he is concerned...

JIMBOPAT2011.03.27 - 11:02AM1: Visiting HoursSigned
TERRIFIC START, TO WHAT I CAN SEE, WILL BE A GREAT STORY. SAD & TRAGIC FOR NOW, I CAN FEEL FOR THEM BOTH. HOPE YOU WILL LET SOME LIGHT INTO THEIR LIVES, I SEE QUITE A FEW SAD ENDS TO STORIES FOR SOME REASON NOW. WONDERING WHAT THE JAIL TIME WAS FOR, YOU GOT ME HOOKED... JIM

Author's Response: Jim, I'm so sorry, but this is it! This was all the Muse gave me...

Blueyedsparrow2011.03.27 - 10:43AM1: Visiting HoursSigned
Broke my heart. Very lovely though. I thought perhaps I had misread, so I had to go back and read the entire fic over again. So ...what did she do?

Author's Response: I don't know....my Muse didn't tell me anymore than what you see here...

Silvermage2011.03.27 - 10:29AM1: Visiting HoursSigned
Wonderful as ever, I was really excited to see your name at the top of the new fics - I did guess from the start, but only because I thought you were too good not to put in a bit of a twist!

Author's Response: Thank you! Such nice comments, and so appreciated. I'm glad you enjoyed it; your comments mean more than I can say.

Tangerine Dream2011.03.27 - 09:05AM1: Visiting HoursSigned
Beautiful but sad. I suspected there might be a twist. Now I am racking my brains trying to think of why she would be in there! Nicely done!

Author's Response: As always, Tangerine, it is lovely to see you here in my review basket. Thank you for reading and your kind words.

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