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verasuspense2014.10.14 - 12:48AM1: Signed
it's such a pity that this story has been abandoned. I was so looking forward to seeing the Ginger Whinger get what's coming to him.

Jong_Kahn2013.02.19 - 09:19PM1: Signed
Mr. Doomspark, sir! Seeing as it's been nigh onto nine months now, how's about throwing us raptors another hunk of fresh chapter? Miss your writing, Doomy dear! Here's a "9" just to 'spark' your interest!

vze57t9j2012.05.29 - 05:41AM1: Signed
Excellent beginning!!! Ugh! I hate Ron! I can't wait to read the look on his face when it all comes out! Anyways, I'm very glad that Hermione will be able to take care of her little family with all the resources and friendships that Hogwarts has to offer. Although, I don't envy her trying to explain to two little guys that they will one day be able to do magic. I can imagine them yelling up a storm and happily bouncing all over the place with the news! :D

Author's Response: *grin* This is my "Ron is a prat" story. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Ethylene2011.11.15 - 11:34PM1: Signed
I'm already invested in knowing how it all plays out. Love it! There was so much in that chapter--I can't wait to read the next. Your Hermione feels familiar (in a good way) and strong; I like her very much. And though there has not been much Snape yet, I feel the same. They seem more mature, better developed versions of themselves--This is a compliment (really!) though it's probably coming across as daft and lame. Forgive me. Work trounced me completely and the two brain cells i'm rubbing together now are failing spectacularly. I'll rest up and review next chapter.

Author's Response: I understand about work eating one's brain cells. I often feel like that. Stay tuned for more updates!

severus492011.11.10 - 12:12AM1: Signed
I can't wait to see how this pans out! I remember reading a similar story to this beginning, years ago. But the child (or was it children?) remained squibs.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying Varlet. I hope to have another chapter uploaded soon.

Jong_Kahn2011.10.31 - 11:11PM1: Signed
In rereading this to catch up to the newer chapters, I realized you'd named one of Hermione's sons Tom. Considering LV's original name, it seemed like an odd choice. I'm not being critical, you understand, it was just...unexpected, considering all the pain that one Tom visited upon the wizarding world. (And what was the other twin's name?) All that aside, I enjoyed this chapter. I particularly appreciated Snape's job offer, and his help to her in giving more insight into her situation than she was aware of.

Author's Response: A couple other folks have said the same thing about "Tom". When I wrote this, it didn't even register with me that LV's real name is Tom - I think of him as Voldemort.

Moonlit Euphoria2011.10.31 - 08:14PM1: Signed
Love this so far and I can't wait to read more!

celticqueen2011.10.31 - 08:12AM1: Signed
I feel like the story would be good, but if there is such a glaring error in the begining, what could be later? That is not just a mistake or typo. Errors make readers question the writer's validity. The story is not badly written, but take time to check on facts, as if it was a published story.

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