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paddiew2011.03.05 - 09:59AM1: Signed
Great start. Raises so many questions. I can't see anyone naming their sons Tom for many, many years. Maybe Thomas, if it is a family name. Seen any little Adolfs lately? Don't mean to be snide--I just thought it was funny. I am looking forward to Ron getting his comeuppance, finding out what happened to everyone, and if it was Snape reading botany books in the bookstore. Also what did Ron tell the wizarding world about his divorce? Thank you for your work.

Losumi2011.03.05 - 08:58AM1: Signed
I like this very much -- can't wait for more!

Amr2011.03.05 - 08:05AM1: Signed
Very nice start, as I've come to expect from your stories. You've conveyed very well the monotony and minor satisfactions of Hermione's life, and I look forward to meeting her twins. I usually dislike stories that make Ron the villain--I know he can be a petty prat in canon, but I don't think the support is there for making him quite this callously evil. But you've made the circumstances plausible--major pureblood embarrassment from his children's apparent lack of magic, resentment of Hermione's refusal to become his mother, and the evil lawyer's tempting offer of a quick, easy chance to start over. I'm curious how you're going to deal with the revenge timescale, though, since the kids are only four and won't get Hogwarts letters for another 11 years. Still, it's a lovely set-up, and I'll look forward to future chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! This is my "Ron is a prat" story; he's an easy villain. On the revenge bit - once the twins' power manifests, their names will be written in The Book - they don't have to wait until they get letters from Hogwarts.

brightfame2011.03.05 - 06:49AM1: Signed
I must confess, I don't review as often as I should, but this plot so far has me intrigued! I will look forward to the updated chapters!

Bicca2011.03.05 - 04:51AM1: Signed
This is gonna be good. Waiting with bated breath.

Cenicienta2011.03.05 - 03:36AM1: Signed
Great chapter and I love the spell. Sounds very interesting and I put you on my favs!

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy my stories.

verasuspense2011.03.05 - 01:15AM1: Signed
Okay, Art is short for Arthur, the boys' grandfather, but TOM ? Unless Hermione's father was Thomas Granger, I can't see her naming a son Tom. I really hope Ron the Bastard gets what's coming to him. I'm hoping the day comes when he wants to reclaim 'his' sons, only to find that wizarding law doesn't allow that. So they grow up as Arthur and Thomas Granger (Snape), Ron has only the one daughter by his new wife, and Hermione takes all his money, just like he took hers. Hermione shouldn't worry about how to explain the wizarding world to the twins. At their age, the world in general is a wonder, so they will probably take it all in stride.

Author's Response: Well, yes... you're not the only one who has said that about Tom's name. But I was actually thinking of Thomas Becket when I chose it.

Jong_Kahn2011.03.04 - 11:52PM1: Signed
Quite an interesting beginning! I can hardly wait to see how you develop this. Great first chapter--thanks for your work.

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