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Reviews for Cast Out

christev2013.08.16 - 09:54AM1: 1Signed
Wonderful story! Thank you so much for translating it, and for doing such a smooth job of it. The mix of present narration with the flashbacks was lovely. Ron's was well done - not a horrid monster, but played on the selfish and lazy aspects of his character that resulted in him refusing to try to live in the Muggle world. That nose punch was very satisfying. I also loved the slow pace of Severus and Hermione's relationship, and that Madge was so central to it. Once again, great job! I hope that Iad knows how much English speakers have enjoyed her wonderful fic, thanks to you!

Ljpjcg2012.03.21 - 02:13AM1: 1Signed
This wonderful story was an unexpected surprise. I really enjoyed the imagery you invoked and the intense words said between all characters. And Ron is an ass for abandoning and blaming Hermione.

Maria2012.01.20 - 04:49AM1: 1Signed
Confusing. But a great premise. Was Madge's real first name Magic? How weird.

loreen772011.05.01 - 12:49PM1: 1Signed
Great job, the original author did a wonderful job. Your translation was also great. Thank you for bringing a great story to the english audience.

ladyjulian2011.02.10 - 02:13AM1: 1Signed
oh well done - but in places so painful...

MollysSister2011.01.20 - 10:06PM1: 1Signed
Oh wait stop it ended too fast for me. Was Madge's first name really "magic" Could Hermione really affect her unborn child to make her a squib or was Ron just being an ass? I am astounded but not surprised at the depths of Hermione's sacrafice for her child. Leave the magical world. Oh poor Ginny and Harry. I am saddened that she could not pull herself together to parent their children. This is a powerful story. Thank you for translating it.

Nerdlee2011.01.13 - 05:26PM1: 1Signed
I can't even tell you how much I have loved this or how much I desire it to be even longer. For it to be a full length story. I can't tell you how interesting and lovely all your convoluted words are to me. I can't tell you because the words have been used before in other praises that don't do this justice. Please, I know you're finished with this, but please...write more of this delectable story. ~Mia

teatime2011.01.13 - 04:51PM1: 1Signed
Poor Ginny, she didn't deserve to loose the love of her life but she couldn't see that everyone lost a lot. (We didn't even know about Snape until the end being related to Harry's death.) Great story! I really enjoyed reading it.

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