Reviews for Felicity's Children
| Jong_Kahn | 2011.12.22 - 12:02PM | 1: Felicity's Children | Signed |
| Reread this again. One sentence needs correction, in the Goose Flesh section: " 'If you want the potion that badly, than it shouldn't behoove you to come pick it up.' " Change the "than" to "then", and remove the negative, otherwise he's saying the opposite of what he means. "If you want the potion that badly, THEN it BEHOOVES you to come pick it up." The only errors in a very well-written story. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2011.01.04 - 02:27AM | 1: Felicity's Children | Signed |
| Quite a powerful story. Too painful, too real. Very well done. Thank you. |
| Deeble | 2010.12.30 - 10:58PM | 1: Felicity's Children | Signed |
| Goodness, that was tough to read in the way that terrible-but-true things are. I could see that happening to Hermione. I could see Snape doing exactly what he did. This is the sort of story that sticks with you. |
| Derelict Author | 2010.12.30 - 02:17AM | 1: Felicity's Children | Signed |
| What an absolutely gripping tale. Some bits of your prose literally shook me; some of Hermione's entries seemed too uncomfortably familiar from personal anxiety. You have captured this well. A sad ending, though definitely a powerful one. |
| snapefanjlh | 2010.12.29 - 04:59AM | 1: Felicity's Children | Signed |
| I agree with all of the reviews that were posted before mine. This was REALLY powerful, and just... Wow. The level of care also, from Severus was great. Even though he was supporting her habit.. You capture the utterly twisted ways of addicts, and the people that care for them, perfectly. Great job! |
| who | 2010.12.29 - 01:58AM | 1: Felicity's Children | Signed |
| Wow. Just, wow. Very intense; very well written. I can't say that I truly enjoyed it, as it isn't a story to be enjoyed, but it is a very good story indeed. |
| Lady Sacrifice | 2010.12.29 - 01:16AM | 1: Felicity's Children | Signed |
| It was raw and it was excruciating and I loved every second of it. You captured Addiction perfectly. |
| zenia | 2010.12.28 - 11:05PM | 1: Felicity's Children | Signed |
| Agreed! I would like to see more of this story as well! I hope you consider writing more! |
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