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| auntlynnie | 2011.01.08 - 07:47PM | 6: I Should Have Known | Signed |
| I kind of love Hermione's diary entries. I like seeing her POV. Author's Response: thank you!!! so many people didn't like it and said it was a cop-out, so i'm really sensitive about that chapter. thanks for the boost! :) | |||
| Gomes | 2011.01.08 - 06:26PM | 7: A Temptation of His Own Creation | Signed |
| Excellent. I absolutely adored the awkward situation at the end - so much that my toes tingled! I'm grinning madly right now, and I do hope the next chapter finds its way to me soon, because I'm quite interested in the upcoming developments. Your characterization is great and I can't wait to see where you take this. Thanks so much for sharing! (AND HURRY PLEASE! ♥) Author's Response: :-D you're so enthusiastic, it makes me happy :) | |||
| Gomes | 2011.01.08 - 06:18PM | 6: I Should Have Known | Signed |
| Very nice! I really liked reading Hermione's insights on these events - especially spying on Draco and Severus! I like the little touch of humour added as well! Looking forward to reading more - hopefully a development similar to the one in the ice-cream department? ;) Author's Response: ohhh there are developments ;) | |||
| Gomes | 2011.01.08 - 06:10PM | 5: Hold the Mayo | Signed |
| The shift was nicely paced - in what was to be a forced-niceties situation, which turned into something of interest. It was comfortable but still kept that edge of making me want something more. Great work! Can't wait to read more! Author's Response: you're a doll! | |||
| Gomes | 2011.01.08 - 05:58PM | 4: What Did You Do? | Signed |
| Wonderful chapter so far. I really enjoyed the defense Draco brought up, relating Muggle Kings and Queens to Pure-Bloods. I'm curious to see what this revelation brings for Hermione. And can I just say that Severus's pet-name for Draco almost caused me to choke on my tea! HAHAHA! Brilliant. Author's Response: it always bugged me that hermione was so short-sighted. this was kind of a cathartic chapter for me :) | |||
| Gomes | 2011.01.08 - 05:49PM | 3: I’ll Have the Usual | Signed |
| Great dialogue, and I'm liking the pace you've set. Severus's insights at the beginning were great, offering him a more human side. Again, looking forward to reading more! Thanks for sharing! Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! | |||
| Gomes | 2011.01.08 - 05:43PM | 2: Her Cloying Perfume | Signed |
| Again, wonderful banter between all three of them. Your characterization is spot-on, and I'm glad that Severus is still a bastard. Hahaha! Looking forward to reading more - I can already feel the cauldron simmer! ♥ Author's Response: if snape wasn't a bastard, i wouldn't love him so much :-P | |||
| Gomes | 2011.01.08 - 05:41PM | 1: Prologue/Return to Spinner's End | Signed |
| The premise is very intriguing, and your character work is fantastic. I am in love with the bond you've created between Severus and Draco. You mentionning that Severus "changed his diapers" was a wonderful touch, especially since you established AND KEPT that ease-of-relationship between them through actions and great banter. Can't wait to read more - thanks so much for sharing. Author's Response: you leave the best reviews. you're officially my new favorite reviewer :) | |||
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