Reviews for The Black-Eyed Angel
Loyd1957 | 2010.12.18 - 07:58PM | 5: Four: Yule Ball 2005 | Signed |
Well you have a strong command on the language of love and seduction. One of the most hottest scenes I have ever read. I like the going from past to present to see the building of the relationship. There bond was so strong, I hate to see how this is hurting Hermione.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I have never done anything like this before (the past/present jumps), and I've been amazed at the response I've had for it. I hope you continue to enjoy. |
droxy | 2010.12.18 - 07:05PM | 5: Four: Yule Ball 2005 | Signed |
What--- you have a PROLOG like that and not kill him? -imperio- dont tease angst death fic loving deatheaters...
Author's Response: Yes, Mistress Droxy.....
tee hee.....tee hee.... |
Rema | 2010.12.18 - 05:52PM | 5: Four: Yule Ball 2005 | Signed |
Arrghh! Why did you have to stop there?
Author's Response: Because I wanted them to shag in the next chapter! ;) |
droxy | 2010.12.18 - 05:37PM | 5: Four: Yule Ball 2005 | Signed |
holy -oh- my-guh...
Seriously, what sane het woman would say no to that?
Sadly there is no more to read.
Since you state he's dead. I hope you do have a funeral.
Romantic/erotic story + death, I could ask for no greater entertainment in reading.
Author's Response: Did I?????? Say what?????? Dead?????? Are you sure, Droxy??????? Mwahahahahahahahaha!!!!!! |
droxy | 2010.12.18 - 05:15PM | 4: Three: Christmastide 2005 | Signed |
I also love UST. You pour it on with buckets. SQUEEES. LOL His comment that he's a coward...such a Sytherin..XD Enjoyed the romance in the chapter.
Author's Response: And HEA UST kinda gal, that's me!! The coward reference does kinda come back to haunt him,though. |
PILKY | 2010.12.18 - 05:03PM | 5: Four: Yule Ball 2005 | Signed |
I ove this story, well written, erotic and I can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so glad you are enjoying the story. I hope you will continue to enjoy upcoming chapters. |
toxicgoth | 2010.12.18 - 04:56PM | 5: Four: Yule Ball 2005 | Signed |
Not fair to stop the chapter before they shag!
Wonderful imagery with the dueling memory.
Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am amazed at the response I had to the 'duel'. It was really not given that much thought beyond something that would really get Hermione's knickers heated up, but I'm so glad everyone is enjoying it so much. It just goes to show how something you don't think is very important becomes so essential to a story. Be ye warned, there be lemons arriving on the next ship! |
droxy | 2010.12.18 - 04:35PM | 3: Two: Christmastide 2009 | Signed |
Hermione doesn't realize she made his life totally complete. He didn't leave her, he was taken away. This chapter is so sweet. It makes our fangurl lives seem so much gray in comparison to the fantasy presented here. We ache for that passion. So nicely presented. -sighs- lovely..
Author's Response: Droxy, girl, you are a trip! Thanks for your comments, they really warm my heart. I will tell you, that when all is said and done, I am an HEA girl, so I may break your heart in the end. I'm wicked that way. |
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