Reviews for Dented and Tarnished
| Destine | 2018.08.01 - 12:29AM | 2: Part the Second | Signed |
| This has gotten quite interesting. |
| Tangerine Dream | 2010.12.09 - 02:47PM | 2: Part the Second | Signed |
| Oh this just gets better and better!! Can't wait to read more!!! |
| siage | 2010.12.09 - 09:00AM | 2: Part the Second | Signed |
| Fascinating and unique premise. Can't wait for more. Thanks! |
| Mada | 2010.12.08 - 07:34PM | 2: Part the Second | Signed |
| Wow, that was a quick update! Go you! I'm very intrigued to see where you'll take this and to learn just how Severus can control Hermione's presence in the box. I look forward to reading Harry's epiphany about the nature of the spell and box! One small critique: I struggled to understand who was speaking in turn during the telepathic dialogue. |
| Yukimor | 2010.12.08 - 05:41PM | 2: Part the Second | Signed |
| It was too much to hope for that you might post a second chapter, since you usually post such short one-shots or drabble collections but-- lo and behold-- alakazam! =D |
| Amr | 2010.12.08 - 04:18PM | 2: Part the Second | Signed |
| This is great! What a puzzle you've set us! I adore the image of Hermione polishing the dark places of Snape's soul until its still complex beauty glistens and then smoothing out the dents where he's been battered. And I love the pleasure he's taken in the process. So the stinging of Harry was not because he was Harry, but because he was not Hermione. And I like it that he had the wit not to ask her why she hadn't tried to correct his opinions about Snape. I shall look forward to the continuation of this. |
| in_dreams | 2010.12.08 - 04:13PM | 2: Part the Second | Signed |
| Hmm, sounds like Snape isn't ready to completely depart yet! Oh dear, Hermione is in quite a pickle, isn't she? |
| verasuspense | 2010.12.08 - 09:59AM | 2: Part the Second | Signed |
| My Gosh, Harry is actually learning to think ! What next - Ron says something clever ? :-D |
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