Reviews for Spellbreaker
Aurette | 2010.11.19 - 02:23PM | 1: Chapter 1: Coming Home, or Not, As The Case May Be | Signed |
Great story! Your writing is excellent and this is a fascinating take on an AU Severus and Hermione. Your characterizations are quite unique and your Severus has an unusual, vulnerable quality, whilst Hermione is well portrayed in overt denial of her war trauma. The desolation he feels at being denied his expected happy-ever-after was poignent, and his bitterness believable. Thank you so much for sharing this, and I look forward to more from you soon!
Author's Response: Aurette, I am humbled beyond belief at your encouraging words. You are such a role model to me! I have purposely made Hermione almost a 'shadowy' figure, to give this a completely SS POV. I am happy the way it is going, in that you don't really get must of Hermione's feelings or motivations, just how he reacts to her or engages with her. I hope it works! Thank you again for taking the time to read. Your comments are very important to me. |
WnL624 | 2010.11.19 - 04:12AM | 3: Chapter 3: Wounded Heart | Signed |
It is nice to know that Snape is finally finding a measure of gladness for being alive. Thank you for sharing and looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you for your encouraging words. The story is ready and I'm in the queue to upload it all. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. |
Cenicienta | 2010.11.18 - 11:46PM | 3: Chapter 3: Wounded Heart | Signed |
Very few stories reflect the anger and humanity of Severus Snape. You accomplished both showing raw emotions and pure desolation. Wonderful job; great song/poem as well and I hope to read more from you since you have great talent. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you for your encouraging words. The story has 7 chapters, so I hope you continue to enjoy it. |
greenwood | 2010.11.18 - 11:34PM | 3: Chapter 3: Wounded Heart | Signed |
Over so soon! Just when he was beginning to become human! Very nice story.
Author's Response: Sorry, not over yet! I uploaded all my chapters (7 in all) and marked it complete, but there is more to come! |
greenwood | 2010.11.18 - 11:17PM | 2: Chapter 2: Did I shave my legs for this? | Signed |
Severus is really NASTY in this one. But it would seem true to form. Grangers reaction seemed true to form as well. Wow, I can't wait to read more. This story is really juicy with emotions.
Author's Response: Thank you for your encouraging remarks. This is my first fanfic so I'm a little nervous! It has 7 chapters in all, and I hope you continue to enjoy the story. |
aurora borealis | 2010.11.18 - 10:53PM | 3: Chapter 3: Wounded Heart | Signed |
This was lovely! I really liked the combination of humor and poignancy. ("Snape something" in the last chapter was hilarious!) I see the story is marked as completed, but I would love to read more.
Author's Response: Sorry, I'm new to SH and since I uploaded all the chapters (There are 7 in all) I marked it complete. Thank you for your encouraging remarks. |
gifarlme | 2010.11.18 - 10:22PM | 3: Chapter 3: Wounded Heart | Signed |
sweet story - it says complete but is it? I was hoping for more....pretty please?
Author's Response: Sorry, I uploaded all the chapters and marked it complete but SH hasn't uploaded all my chapters yet! It has 7 chapters.
Thank you for your encouraging remarks. I hope you will continue to enjoy the story. |
verasuspense | 2010.11.18 - 07:42PM | 1: Chapter 1: Coming Home, or Not, As The Case May Be | Signed |
Its painful to watch Severus groveling before Lily; at least she's not scornful this time.
Author's Response: Thank you for your words of encouragement. As a first time author I appreciate the feedback. There are 7 chapters here. |
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