Reviews for Spellbreaker
Black Aliss | 2010.11.23 - 04:10PM | 1: Chapter 1: Coming Home, or Not, As The Case May Be | Signed |
If this is your first story (surely not!!) I can hardly wait for more. It hits ALL the right buttons about our favorite student/professor. Your descriptive powers and story progression are a delight to read. Only thing I can add to this review is "More!..More! Please!" Thank you for a GREAT read.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for your encouraging words. I cannot express how much they mean to me. I have written erotic fiction before (my full novel is in deviantArt) but never a fanfic. I am greatly inspired now and I'm working on a new one, but if I never write again I will always be warmed by your generosity of spirit. |
paddiew | 2010.11.23 - 10:11AM | 7: Epilogue: Redemption Song | Signed |
Great story. I don't know if it is a six chapter epic or a fairytale, but you covered all the emotions. Exciting plot. I look forward to more work from you. Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words. This was inspired by a drawing by Sempraseverus on deviantArt, then she drew a series for each chapter. I am a blessed woman. I do hope to write more, and I'm working on something now, so we'll see how it goes. |
curly | 2010.11.23 - 08:36AM | 7: Epilogue: Redemption Song | Signed |
Absolutely amazing! After reading ch 1 and your note that it would only be 7 chapters, I had a hard time believing it would be a satisfying story. Somehow you did it. It is a credit to you that you were able to pack so many emotions and half a lifetime in such a short well written story. What makes it even more admirable is that you wrote in 1st person which is quite difficult and often falls flat. You infused this story with pain and anguish but through it all, a wonderful sense of humor. I do believe you are the first author to mention a woman farting while in labor LOL. I think I can speak for everyone when we mention we are amazed that this is your first story and our fervent wish to see more from you. Two little things; technically, it should be number of toes and fingers instead of amount ( countable vs non countable) and what was Neville's joke that she told him when he had his panic attack? Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Author's Response: Thank you for such an in-depth review. I have never had kids, ergo the mistake. I will try to rectify it!
By the way, the joke was: What do you call the woman who falls in love with the Potions Master? A Snape Charmer.
Thank you for caring enough to write me. I cannot tell you how much it means to me. |
EleanorRigby | 2010.11.23 - 07:12AM | 1: Chapter 1: Coming Home, or Not, As The Case May Be | Signed |
Absolutely loved this story! Hope to see some more from you!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and writing a review. I appreciate it more than I can say. |
Fizzabella | 2010.11.23 - 05:44AM | 7: Epilogue: Redemption Song | Signed |
this was amazing, and it's the soul of SS HG fan fiction!!! Brava!!!!
Fizzabella
Author's Response: Fizzabella, as someone who has read your work, I cannot thank you for your kind words. It has been an amazing thing to do and to be given such encouragement is amazing. Thank you so much. |
jrzygirl12 | 2010.11.23 - 02:52AM | 7: Epilogue: Redemption Song | Signed |
So beautiful! Loved it, thank you!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! |
deejay | 2010.11.22 - 09:00PM | 7: Epilogue: Redemption Song | Signed |
I loved this, and I want to thank you very much for updating at lightning speed.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I had it written for deviantArt's Sempraseverus, and I just wanted to get it updated. I find myself going crazy waiting a long time for an update, even though it generates more reviews, but being my first time, and being an instant gratification kind of gal, I just couldn't wait! |
aurora borealis | 2010.11.22 - 07:25PM | 7: Epilogue: Redemption Song | Signed |
A beautiful finish to a terrific story!
Author's Response: Many, many thanks for taking the time to read and write a review. |
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