Reviews for Out of the Depths
linn from IA | 2010.11.05 - 11:18AM | 7: Seven | Signed |
I enjoy both the actual love-making and the slow build up -- his absence, her note, their eyes meeting, the haze of lust that Hermione is in ... it's very well-written, very smart. I see them connecting sexually, but also noticing each other constantly.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I do hope there is much more beyond the sex. More very soon. x |
bubbles28 | 2010.11.05 - 01:24AM | 7: Seven | Signed |
damn.
Author's Response: Thank you! More soon. x |
Evie Sunny Rae | 2010.11.04 - 11:59PM | 7: Seven | Signed |
love it so far... can't wait to see how you develop the relationship. i imagine plenty of issues facing the pair... keep up the updates please!!!
Author's Response: Oh yes, plenty of issues to come ... more very soon. x |
Blueyedsparrow | 2010.11.04 - 08:23PM | 7: Seven | Signed |
Sooo good! Keep it comin:)
Author's Response: Will do, have no fear! x |
AlansPickles | 2010.11.04 - 01:27PM | 7: Seven | Signed |
wow that was definately one of the most erotic moments i have read on ashwinder, you're a damn good writer. i assume the story is complete but i would love to see a chapter from sev's POV. :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Just noticed your username! Laughing a lot now!!
Yeah, Severus' POV. We get glimpses, especially as the story progresses, but it can become difficult to keep switching, and in a way I wanted the revealing of his thoughts to be as it would for Hermione - slow and gradual - chipping away. More soon. x |
snoopy | 2010.11.04 - 02:47AM | 7: Seven | Signed |
I think I need a cold shower...... wow I can hardly wait to see what happens next...
Author's Response: Thank you! More very soon. x |
snapefanjlh | 2010.11.04 - 01:48AM | 7: Seven | Signed |
I am in love with this story.
I think you have found a very nice balance between great erotica, and a really nice plot as well.
I can't wait to read more of it.
Keep up the good work. :]
Author's Response: Thank you so much. There is certainly a lot of sex in this story, but I hope all of it casts light on these characters and what they need in their humanity. x |
Potions Mistresss | 2010.11.04 - 12:29AM | 7: Seven | Signed |
What do I think? Mmmmmmmm. I welcome the plot, and appreciate good writing. But these sexual moments between them are amazing... did you say this story is finished and you're just posting here now?
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yes, this story is completed. I would urge you to stay with reading it here, as I have posted edited versions in various places and the one I am posting here is by far the one I'm most pleased with. If you do go in search of it, please read it on The Petulant Poetess (where I am nearing the end of my submissions). The others just seem like self-indulgent rough drafts to me now. More very soon. x |
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