Reviews for Of All The Sounds
tjturtle | 2011.07.20 - 02:58AM | 18: Epilogue | Signed |
Oooh, very well written. My only complaint was that it felt like the relationship between Megan (i forgot how you spelled it) and Remus was rushed and not explained very well. He kept saying that he was with her, but you never showed them together or doing anything that couples do. Then suddenly they break up because they've been fighting all the time. Other than that, I greatly enjoyed it. I hope you keep writing!! |
Tangerine Dream | 2011.07.16 - 06:23PM | 18: Epilogue | Signed |
What a wonderful story!! I am so glad everything worked out for them. |
suzy snape | 2011.07.16 - 05:47PM | 18: Epilogue | Signed |
I really enjoyed your story. I particularly liked the way you wrapped it up-'it was not rushed or dragged out- just the right length. |
loreen77 | 2011.07.15 - 08:18PM | 18: Epilogue | Signed |
Nice job. I enjoyed your story. |
loreen77 | 2011.07.14 - 09:51PM | 6: Chapter Six | Signed |
Alas maybe ss is really trying to save her from the frustration of failure, or he is just a git. |
Diarmids_Lypiphera | 2011.07.12 - 05:12PM | 18: Epilogue | Signed |
Did I miss a bit of cleanup? I thought Astoria was having an affair with Greyback, and that the first pregnancy was with him? Mybe I missed a paragraph explaining what happened.
Author's Response: Yes, I think you might have missed a bit. It's in chapter thirteen. You had me worried for a second though, I thought maybe I had missed a chapter . |
Elou | 2011.07.12 - 11:21AM | 18: Epilogue | Signed |
It's over... *sob*
I loved the entire journey. So well done. Touching, sad, exciting, and a marvel.
Thank you for sharing it~Elou |
decarde | 2011.07.11 - 11:59PM | 18: Epilogue | Signed |
What a terrific story. I found myself wishing that it wasn't ending as I read this epilogue. |
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