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Reviews for Llansteffan House

tialangela2019.09.19 - 05:46PM2: Chapter TwoSigned
Oohhh, can't wait for more! :D

loreen772011.04.25 - 08:09PM2: Chapter TwoSigned
Fun story, would of been great expanded more but I undrrstand why it will nit be. I enjoyed it and will let my imagination play with this concept.

Author's Response: Thank you.

loreen772011.04.25 - 07:59PM1: Chapter OneSigned
Evil bad author giving a great big cliffhanger here, well onto the next chapter. Fun story so far.

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Loyd19572010.09.10 - 06:56PM2: Chapter TwoSigned
Awesome story, great mystery...but almost moving so fast. I was surprised at how fast Severus and Hermione got intimate. The mere thought of them having more moments of bantering back and forth until they realized their need for one another would have been nice. Plus, the whole side story of I assume his land? Don't know if this is almost over or not, but hope you can drag it out longer.

Author's Response: Sorry, there isn't more. As stated in the author's notes, this was an exchange piece. Your piece has to be done when it's an exchange piece - so this is finished.

nediffer2010.09.09 - 06:26PM1: Chapter OneSigned
Enjoyed the story! I used to live in Carmarthen, and I know Llansteffan quite well...I guess you're from there? :)

Author's Response: Thanks. And no... never been to Llansteffan (as of yet)... but who knows, I may win the lotto and get a chance to go back to the UK sometime.

winters2010.09.09 - 02:42PM2: Chapter TwoSigned
Actually, you have the start of a really good story. It just needs to be expanded. Hermione & Severus need to do more to "solve" the mystery. No shagging in a dirty cellar right after being hit in the head. Maybe later after they've made some effort to get out. Same goes for sex after being shot and no pain potion in sight. It was so unreasonable that I couldn't enjoy it so I just skipped the 2nd sex scene entirely. Otherwise, your writing is well done it the way to describe scenes and your dialogue is well done.

Author's Response: Mmm thanks. It was written for the sshg exchange so it won't be expanded because the whole point was to have something completed for the giftee, within the parameters he/she set out, within the 2 month period. It's not something I normally write, nor will try to do again (unless I get another prompt that is within these parameters again).

Sampdoria2010.09.09 - 04:26AM2: Chapter TwoSigned
Lovely story, I really liked it. It left a couple of questions thoug: Whas Hermione married getting a divorce, long time relationship ending? With who? Why did she loose her job? What "mudblood" started the faud in the first place, and why? Most importantly, what did Hermione want to do to Severus there at the end? (Marry him I hope:-))

Author's Response: Hermione's relationship is left up to the imagination - in my head, it was Ron being a prat. It started with one of Hermione's ancestors - the ghost who was choked to death in the upstairs bedroom - she was betrothed to someone in Gertrude's pureblood family. And the ending, as always, is up to interpretation too.

Bohemond2010.09.09 - 02:55AM1: Chapter OneSigned
Nice story. I like the setting and Gertrude's character. A pity there isn't more about the mysteries of the house Great Aunt Sarah mentioned. I've got some reservations about the second lemony scene. It doesn't feel completely natural that they should shag when they're both prisoners of an unknown captor. Perhaps they just both need human warmth after their ordeal. I don't know, really. Meanwhile, why is it that one SS/HG writer out of two wants Severus to spend his second life in Wales? Is this website supported by the Wales Tourist Board? ;)

Author's Response: No not supported at all :o). As someone who has been to Wales - I can completely understand why other writers want them to end up there - it's a magical place.

I think people do some odd things when in danger, so the second lemony scene was natural to me. And the house never was supposed to be fully explained - Hermione has a life-time to discover everything, if she decides to stay.

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