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Reviews for Cave of Mind

Jong_Kahn2010.11.05 - 12:33PM1: Cave of MindSigned
Yes...I thought I'd read this earlier. I'm glad Hermione's spirit joined Severus', although now she's an old woman and he's younger than she is, that's an entirely different situation, yes? At least it's emotionally satisfying, knowing he's not alone for eternity, nor is she.

Tangerine Dream2010.08.18 - 05:42PM1: Cave of MindSigned
Well written. I prefered the full version as well.

Javoher2010.08.17 - 11:29PM1: Cave of MindSigned
Yes, I prefer the original too. Sometimes it helps to have a few more words. Nicely done.

aurora borealis2010.08.17 - 06:39PM1: Cave of MindSigned
It was interesting to compare the two versions. I actually liked the first two paragraphs of the brief version best - with fewer words, they had a little more impact. But I liked the third paragraph of the "fuller" version better (go figure!) - having a little more background helped it make sense. I enjoyed this!




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