Reviews for Cave of Mind
Jong_Kahn | 2010.11.05 - 12:33PM | 1: Cave of Mind | Signed |
Yes...I thought I'd read this earlier. I'm glad Hermione's spirit joined Severus', although now she's an old woman and he's younger than she is, that's an entirely different situation, yes? At least it's emotionally satisfying, knowing he's not alone for eternity, nor is she. |
Tangerine Dream | 2010.08.18 - 05:42PM | 1: Cave of Mind | Signed |
Well written. I prefered the full version as well. |
Javoher | 2010.08.17 - 11:29PM | 1: Cave of Mind | Signed |
Yes, I prefer the original too. Sometimes it helps to have a few more words. Nicely done. |
aurora borealis | 2010.08.17 - 06:39PM | 1: Cave of Mind | Signed |
It was interesting to compare the two versions. I actually liked the first two paragraphs of the brief version best - with fewer words, they had a little more impact. But I liked the third paragraph of the "fuller" version better (go figure!) - having a little more background helped it make sense. I enjoyed this! |
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