Reviews for Target
| greysky8 | 2023.06.05 - 11:47AM | 9: Final Showdown | Signed |
| Best ending Ever! The " before I did This" section.... PARFAIT! Also really appreciated the fact that they decided, each of them, to keep their feelings on the down low til after THINGS were resolved. That way seems much more in character for Snape and Hermione. AND we still get the Happy Ending We want and They deserve! : D Thanks for this |
| Ive | 2019.07.09 - 09:53PM | 9: Final Showdown | Signed |
| I think this story hung together quite well, and that's rather surprising, with the challenge guidelines! You did a really nice job.
I thought that perhaps the ending was a bit rushed, but the rules almost necessitated it. |
| BlurryEel133 | 2016.02.22 - 07:10PM | 1: A Credible Threat | Signed |
| I love the story and I truly believe that the actions of the characters are believable. |
| marisamarinee | 2014.02.21 - 08:09PM | 6: Change of Season | Signed |
| His expression was enigmatic as he leaned down to whisper in her ear, so quietly that she barely heard him, “Neither would I, Miss Granger.” Straightening, he said in a more formal tone, “Good night, Miss Granger.”
My favorite part! |
| marisamarinee | 2014.02.21 - 12:51AM | 2: Return to Hogwarts | Signed |
| Maybe Percy is the traitor? |
| loreen77 | 2013.03.08 - 09:32PM | 9: Final Showdown | Signed |
| Still love this....such a great ending =) |
| loreen77 | 2013.03.07 - 10:16PM | 1: A Credible Threat | Signed |
| Oh, i like this, great start |
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