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snapefan19832017.09.05 - 06:03PM13: In The DarkSigned
AND I THOUGHT HE WAS NOT REQADY FOR ANYONE ELSE SINCE ALL HE THOUGHT OF IS LUCY AND YET HE CAN STILL KISS HERMIONE AND WANT TO DO MORE WITH HERMIONE?? ‘What happened?’ she whispered, sensing he was as tightly coiled as a spring. ‘I left. It was a ridiculous idea,’ he spat out. He started to pace up and down the decking, and Hermione watched him in silence for a moment, sitting slowly on the cream corner sofa. Eventually she spoke. ‘Something must have happened, Severus. Tell me.’ Severus stopped walking and looked at her. ‘We ate. The food was passable. We talked a little.’ He ran his hand though his hair and started to pace again. ‘Then what?’ Hermione said. Severus stopped and stared over the cliff, not meeting her gaze. ‘I walked her home and she invited me in. I really wanted to go in with her. She looked incredible tonight, and god knows I could do with a fuck, it’s been so long,’ he spat out hoarsely, ‘but I couldn’t do it. I looked at her and all I could think about was Lucy.’ ‘I am confused, Hermione. I feel I do not know myself. An hour ago, I turned down Ines, because my feelings for Lucy would not let me go any further than dinner. And yet I can kiss you, and want you, with no thought for my wife,’ he whispered.

snapefan19832017.09.05 - 06:02PM13: In The DarkSigned
AND I THOUGHT HE WAS NOT REQADY FOR ANYONE ELSE SINCE ALL HE THOUGHT OF IS LUCY AND YET HE CAN STILL KISS HERMIONE AND WANT TO DO MORE WITH HERMIONE?? ‘What happened?’ she whispered, sensing he was as tightly coiled as a spring. ‘I left. It was a ridiculous idea,’ he spat out. He started to pace up and down the decking, and Hermione watched him in silence for a moment, sitting slowly on the cream corner sofa. Eventually she spoke. ‘Something must have happened, Severus. Tell me.’ Severus stopped walking and looked at her. ‘We ate. The food was passable. We talked a little.’ He ran his hand though his hair and started to pace again. ‘Then what?’ Hermione said. Severus stopped and stared over the cliff, not meeting her gaze. ‘I walked her home and she invited me in. I really wanted to go in with her. She looked incredible tonight, and god knows I could do with a fuck, it’s been so long,’ he spat out hoarsely, ‘but I couldn’t do it. I looked at her and all I could think about was Lucy.’

Author's Response: I think Severus has connection with Hermione that he doesn't have with Ines. He is exploring the possibility of seeing other people and found Ines attractive. But Hermione is a friend, and I think deep down he is probably already in love with her. His grief is making him conflicted.

snapefan19832017.09.05 - 06:00PM13: In The DarkSigned
WHEN DID SHE SAY SUCH A THING TO HIM?? accused HIM of being ungentlemanly tonight. ??? BECAUSE I DO NOT SEE IT?? ‘That’s what friends are for.’ She grinned at him. ‘Although there are some things we won’t need to share. Like when you finally get your fuck, for instance.’ Hermione started to giggle and covered her mouth with embarrassment. ‘Now you’re laughing at me!’ he exclaimed, and then started to chuckle a little. ‘I’m sorry,’ Hermione gasped, ‘it must be the wine.’ Severus looked at her as she laughed and he grinned at her, his eyes flashing a little. As she stopped laughing, their eyes met and Severus held her gaze. ‘You look beautiful tonight,’ he whispered softly. ‘That’s the wine talking,’ Hermione breathed, running her tongue over her bottom lip slowly. Severus shook his head and moved his body around so her was facing her. Hermione held her breath as he lifted his hand and gently stroked her cheek. ‘I meant it, Hermione. You really are beautiful,’ he whispered, moving her face closer to hers. ‘What are we doing?’ she whispered. She couldn’t take her eyes from his face. ‘Taking another step,’ he murmured quietly, and covered her lips with his own. They kissed. Softly, Severus brushed his lips against hers, and Hermione ran her hands through his hair and pulled him closer. His hair was smooth and soft, and she caught a waft of bergamot and sandalwood, fragrances that made her think of him. His lips were warm and firm, and he tasted sweet, his mouth infused with a hint of red wine. With a low moan, she opened her lips slowly. His tongue probed her soft, wet mouth tentatively, and then with more desire, and they wrapped their arms around each other and pressed their bodies together, their hearts beating a rhythm against each other. Suddenly, in the middle of the best snog Hermione had ever had, Severus broke away from her. He looked at her and she realised his eyes were wet, and his gaze betrayed his conflicting emotions as he pushed away from her and stood shakily to his feet. ‘Forgive me,’ he rasped, and walked back into the villa. Hermione stared after him, trembling and pulsing from their heady kisses. She flinched slightly as she heard his bedroom door slam shut, but her throbbing crotch and the brush of her erect nipples against her cotton dress were clouding all rational thought. It wasn’t just Severus who needed some form of physical release, and she was damned if she was going to let him walk away from what he started. With determination, Hermione stood and followed him. ****** When she reached his bedroom, she refused to knock. With a deep breath, and a silent prayer to Circe and whomever might be listening, she pushed open the door slowly, stepped inside the dark room, and then closed it behind her with a small click. Hermione could see Severus silhouetted by the open window. The moonlight was caressing his profile and shone silver on his glossy hair, and his nose, lips and chin were thrust into sharp relief. He was staring at nothing, his mouth set in a thin line and the muscles of his shoulders stretching his shirt taut against his back. Hermione felt throb between her legs, and wondered why she hadn’t noticed how gorgeous he was before now. He didn’t look at her, but he must have sensed she was there. ‘You should leave,’ he said flatly. ‘You think so?’ she said softly from the doorway. ‘You have already accused me of being ungentlemanly tonight. If you stay, I am in no doubt you will feel the need to say it again,’ he said, his voice thick with lust, desire or pain, Hermione couldn’t determine which. Perhaps it was a combination of all three. He turned slightly and looked at her, and Hermione’s eyes were immediately drawn to the erection straining against his fly.

snapefan19832017.09.05 - 05:59PM13: In The DarkSigned
WHEN DID SHE SAY SUCH A THING TO HIM?? accused HIM of being ungentlemanly tonight. ??? BECAUSE I DO NOT SEE IT?? They kissed. Softly, Severus brushed his lips against hers, and Hermione ran her hands through his hair and pulled him closer. His hair was smooth and soft, and she caught a waft of bergamot and sandalwood, fragrances that made her think of him. His lips were warm and firm, and he tasted sweet, his mouth infused with a hint of red wine. With a low moan, she opened her lips slowly. His tongue probed her soft, wet mouth tentatively, and then with more desire, and they wrapped their arms around each other and pressed their bodies together, their hearts beating a rhythm against each other. Suddenly, in the middle of the best snog Hermione had ever had, Severus broke away from her. He looked at her and she realised his eyes were wet, and his gaze betrayed his conflicting emotions as he pushed away from her and stood shakily to his feet. ‘Forgive me,’ he rasped, and walked back into the villa. Hermione stared after him, trembling and pulsing from their heady kisses. She flinched slightly as she heard his bedroom door slam shut, but her throbbing crotch and the brush of her erect nipples against her cotton dress were clouding all rational thought. It wasn’t just Severus who needed some form of physical release, and she was damned if she was going to let him walk away from what he started. With determination, Hermione stood and followed him. ****** When she reached his bedroom, she refused to knock. With a deep breath, and a silent prayer to Circe and whomever might be listening, she pushed open the door slowly, stepped inside the dark room, and then closed it behind her with a small click. Hermione could see Severus silhouetted by the open window. The moonlight was caressing his profile and shone silver on his glossy hair, and his nose, lips and chin were thrust into sharp relief. He was staring at nothing, his mouth set in a thin line and the muscles of his shoulders stretching his shirt taut against his back. Hermione felt throb between her legs, and wondered why she hadn’t noticed how gorgeous he was before now. He didn’t look at her, but he must have sensed she was there. ‘You should leave,’ he said flatly. ‘You think so?’ she said softly from the doorway. ‘You have already accused me of being ungentlemanly tonight. If you stay, I am in no doubt you will feel the need to say it again,’ he said, his voice thick with lust, desire or pain, Hermione couldn’t determine which. Perhaps it was a combination of all three. He turned slightly and looked at her, and Hermione’s eyes were immediately drawn to the erection straining against his fly.

Author's Response: Hermione told Severus it wasn't gentlemanly to make a date with a woman and then not turn up when he was procrastinating about going out with Ines.

snapefan19832017.09.05 - 05:34PM10: ItalySigned
did hermione know Ines is a witch??? does Ines know hermione is a witch and severus a wizard??

snapefan19832017.09.05 - 05:32PM10: ItalySigned
if ‘Ines is a seer or an empath or whatever then surely she would now hermione and severus are not a couple?? Your friend, he is very sad,’ she said quietly. Hermione stared at her in surprise. ‘Yes, he is. His wife died recently. How did you know?’ ‘My Grandmother has the sight, and I have a little of her gift. I can sense emotions,’ she said quietly. She looked at Hermione and smiled at her a little. ‘He does not know what you feel for him, I am guessing?’ ‘Feel for him?’ Hermione frowned. ‘I am sure I don’t know what you mean!’ She laughed uncomfortably. What on earth was Ines implying? Ines shook her head a little, and smiled at her. ‘Call me if you need me,’ she said as she walked down the path, raising her hand in a small wave. Hermione shrugged and closed the door, then went to explore the contents of the ‘fridge. She was sure there was a bottle of wine in there somewhere.

Author's Response: Ines didn't say they were a couple. She picked up on Hermione's feelings for Severus. She picked up that Severus was sad because his wife died.

Author's Response: Ines didn't say they were a couple. She picked up on Hermione's feelings for Severus. She picked up that Severus was sad because his wife died.

pigmy2017.02.18 - 05:55AM20: Epilogue: What Dreams May ComeSigned
Wow. This was an amazing story. My heart is so conflicted at the moment.

Author's Response: Bless you. I'm glad I touched you in some way xc

anismenta2016.06.13 - 02:03PM20: Epilogue: What Dreams May ComeSigned
A delicate equilibrium between angst, love and lust...a so sweet tale of lost and healing...

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