Reviews for It Was Supposed to be Over
jeweliux | 2010.06.15 - 01:20PM | 2: Chapter 2 | Signed |
hmmmm intriguing story. adding to favorites. |
Sampdoria | 2010.06.15 - 03:10AM | 2: Chapter 2 | Signed |
Great update, I really like your plot so far and I look forward to read more. |
duj | 2010.06.15 - 02:43AM | 2: Chapter 2 | Signed |
It was a mistake anyone could make. In fact, it's rather surprising so many people manage not to make it. |
duj | 2010.06.15 - 02:41AM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
She'd never cared about his life before, so why would she have cared about it then? Let's hope this is a sign that she's reversing the moral decline of her Hogwarts years. |
Firewall | 2010.06.13 - 10:41AM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
What a terrific beginning! I especially thought the despair and despondency she feels is exactly what the survivors would experience after the final battle. Nicely done. |
nath7 | 2010.06.11 - 10:34PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
I like it....it makes sense that this is what could have happened....I look forward to reading about the green light... |
aurora borealis | 2010.06.11 - 02:35PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
Very moving first chapter - I look forward to more! |
SnapeK | 2010.06.11 - 02:25PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
This is sounding good, Was a great first chapter. I can't wait for more :) |
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