Reviews for The Dark Encounter
sneaky doormouse | 2011.03.07 - 05:07PM | 8: Chapter 8 | Signed |
well this was just wonderful^^
I would love to see where this is going so please keep on writing <3 |
Luthiria | 2010.11.03 - 06:10PM | 8: Chapter 8 | Signed |
Hey! It's been a while since you updated.
More please! :-) |
Tangerine Dream | 2010.10.22 - 06:57PM | 8: Chapter 8 | Signed |
Poor Severus!! He is an outcast on both sides.
Author's Response: That is exactly how I see him too! Thanks for reading! |
madamelecourayer | 2010.10.21 - 09:09AM | 8: Chapter 8 | Signed |
I feel so sorry for Snape! I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I can't wait to see what happens next in your story too! |
mlmonty | 2010.10.21 - 08:59AM | 8: Chapter 8 | Signed |
Ya, know even if he didn't care for Malfoy or Lupin and Kingsly the rejection and callousness would still hurt.
Author's Response: Yeah, I see Snape as a complete outcast, which is hard even if you don't care about the people who are casting you out. Thanks for the review. |
gifarlme | 2010.10.20 - 08:56PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
loving it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review I am glad you are enjoying the story. |
verasuspense | 2010.10.20 - 07:25PM | 8: Chapter 8 | Signed |
I'd like to see the Ferret's face when Snape walks into Potions next day as good as new , except for a bit of a limp.
Author's Response: Nice, I didn't even think about his reaction when he finds out Snape is okay. I am not going to deal with that in this story, but now you have me thinking :P) |
verasuspense | 2010.10.20 - 06:11PM | 8: Chapter 8 | Signed |
One sentence has a couple of typos: "Lupin and *Kinsley* had given him such dirty looks he would never haved dared *except* ", That should be *Kingsley* and *accept*.
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out. I've edited the chapter. Both my beta and Ashwinder missed those. As did I during my million read throughs. Would you be interested in a job as a beta? I can always use another set of eyes that are good at details. |
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