Reviews for Fallout
Erro | 2019.07.24 - 09:57PM | 1: A one-shot | Signed |
Sequel pleasepleaseplease? |
Sinfully_Yours | 2012.10.30 - 07:53AM | 1: A one-shot | Signed |
Unless...? Unless what? Sequel? Please do a sequel. I loved it but sad endings make me cry. Please!!
Author's Response: If the muse ever cooperates, I'd be happy to do a sequel. The "Unless..." was added because I couldn't stand an ending with no hope. Some people love it, some hate it, but for now, at least, that's all there is. Thanks for the review and glad you liked it otherwise! :) |
Buggy | 2012.03.28 - 09:34PM | 1: A one-shot | Signed |
This is a great little angsty piece. Really well written. I've read other's reviews saying you should delete the 'Unless...' at the end and finish it there...imo, definately not, that would be much too depressing. That single word ignited a little spark of hope at the end for me, cos I'm a sucker for a happy ending. For me at least, a sequal would be very well received. :-)
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm with you about needing a little ray of hope at the end. Plus, if the Muse ever cooperates, I have an opening for more. Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you liked it! :) |
foosball | 2011.06.11 - 01:29PM | 1: A one-shot | Signed |
It rings true. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it! :) |
loreen77 | 2011.04.19 - 06:19AM | 1: A one-shot | Signed |
Heartwrenching, it always amazes me the so many people create the thing the fear by acting based on thht fear. I feel sad for them. If he can learn from his mistake and she can truly forgive him, then a sequel would be wonderful. But in real life it often ends here because we can not move on and the resentment builds, sad but true. Great job writing this, very raw.
Author's Response: Thank you very much -- this angsty stuff isn't my usual fare, but sometimes the muse won't shut up. I've recently been thinking about a sequel, so we'll see ... Thanks again! :D |
dracosladymalfoy | 2010.06.26 - 10:15AM | 1: A one-shot | Signed |
I'm a sucker for a "got what you deserved" ending. I would read a sequel becuse I thought this story was so great, but it's not needed. Wonderful writing. Simple.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it! :) |
adelgado | 2010.05.09 - 03:14AM | 1: A one-shot | Signed |
sad face. but if he has that problem she wasright, thanks for writing. I vote for a sequal
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! :) |
sshg0807 | 2010.05.08 - 01:31PM | 1: A one-shot | Signed |
Yes please do a sequel. This was a heartwrenching story. Very well written.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I appreciate the review! |
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