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pahviprinsessa2015.09.19 - 03:49AM26: The WitnessSigned
Greeting from Finland(so please ingore my spelling:D) and extremely big thank you! I have enjoyed your story quite a bit and wanted to try to say proper thanks! I really liked how you told the story from both sides, especially when you used it to build up drama. Also your intresting and advanced use of time as tool of storytelling(like the time Severus were at Spinners End and thought about what had happened earlier) that is ignored by most authors when they try to create versatile text. But the best thing in this was your characters. I have come around quite many times when character development makes suddenly huge leaps and the contrast to how they used to be is almoust ridiculous. Most of the time this has appeared for example like when Severus grows from him grumpy self to Dumbledore-like all-mighty hero. But luckily your Severus was all I wish and believe who he should be. But yeah, thank you very, very much and I'll surdantly check the book 2 (maybe I'll find some juicy parts I so hungry for from there;) Love, Pahvi (P.S. this was so odd to read and also very,very inspiring; I am writing atm a fic where Hermione goes to coma when her magical source ruptures and Severus has to go so deep in her mind to wake her up so he can never pull out of there again - pretty similar shit goes down:D)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely, thorough review! I am glad you liked how I structured the story, and especially the characterizations, which I really worked hard to keep developing slowly and believably. Please do continue with book 2. It is written and is being posted as quickly as I can get chapters through the queue. I often post 2 chapters at once - it will be 30 chapters when it's finished. And yes, there will be some 'juicy' parts in the second book for you! ;-)

astopperindeath2015.09.10 - 09:39AM26: The WitnessSigned
AHHH! So happy to see you reposting again! Can't wait until part 2 is completely posted!!!

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loreen772015.09.02 - 05:13PM26: The WitnessSigned
Yippee. That was a great read. I really enjoyed your tale.

Author's Response: Thanks! It's so nice to have regular readers who consistently review!

loreen772015.09.02 - 04:47PM25: The Phoenix, Part TwoSigned
I loved the mapping spell. Very fun idea and your description was great. Glad Fawkes got her, where did the elf go?

Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to give the curse a little more explanation.

loreen772015.09.02 - 04:19PM24: The Pheonix, Part OneSigned
Interesting idea that society is so against mind magic. I would think that the ministry following you the rest of your life would be horrible.

Author's Response: Well, especially now that the mind arts are connected with Voldemort in people's minds... Even if they aren't sure it's a real thing, they would definitely be thought Dark.

loreen772015.09.02 - 04:19PM24: The Pheonix, Part OneSigned
Interesting idea that society is so against mind magic. I would think that the ministry following you the rest of your life would be horrible.

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loreen772015.09.02 - 01:43PM22: The ExperimentSigned
Glad she finally broke through. I think he will be furious with her but she can use that emotion to access his thoughts more easily.

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loreen772015.09.02 - 01:15PM21: The JournalSigned
Ron can be so obtuse. Now HG just needs to put together the pieces and realize he is hiding in his own mind. Then she can pester him until he acknowledges her.

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