Reviews for Beautiful Bird
Ive | 2019.07.22 - 10:27PM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
Love it! Original and clear! |
loreen77 | 2014.01.05 - 05:11PM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
You forgot to make this completed,but it obviously is. Great story. As promised it all made sense in the end. Glad they are able to be together as a family. |
loreen77 | 2014.01.05 - 04:57PM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
I am intrigued...a little confused but interested. I am sure it will make more sense as I continue. |
verasuspense | 2010.01.31 - 02:00PM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
Is this completed or not ? |
severus49 | 2010.01.30 - 04:32PM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
So Severus was going to go so far to protect his daughter as to change her hair and eye color and DNA if need be to protect her from Fenrir! When it comes right down to it, he's as fierce a protector as any Gryffindor! Go Sev GO! |
Yukimor | 2010.01.30 - 10:54AM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
I must confess that I am still rather confused. ^^; Could you possibly summarize what happened? My impression here is that Evelyn is Severus and Hermione's daughter, but poses as Rose as Ron and Hermione's daughter. Something about werewolves... and an allergic reaction to... wolfsbane? Now I'm completely lost, but the writing is too intruiging for me to simply let it go without understanding. Please? |
angiehooks81 | 2010.01.30 - 10:13AM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
Two thumbs up! |
Sariana | 2010.01.30 - 02:48AM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
Okay, now I can review the real chapter. I was surprised by the ending; I had not predicted who the threat was. But it is quite fitting, and I agree with your A/N about this issue. (Trying not to spoil in case anyone sees this review before finishing the story.) Just clarify what I suspected before: Did the baby have an allergic reaction to Polyjuice? Or was something else going on? I think someone mentioned Boomslang, so Polyjuice makes sense. I like your use of the girl's name/title, and I agree with your choice of definition. So, what is Hugo's real name? (j/k) |
[Previous] 1 2 3 [Next]
|