Reviews for Happy Christmas
Jong_Kahn | 2017.12.28 - 05:47AM | 1: Happy Christmas | Signed |
A lovely li'l Christmas ficlet, indeed! And a Happy Christmas to you, too, Ms. Figg!
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fynnsmom | 2010.07.09 - 08:04AM | 1: Happy Christmas | Signed |
That was funny. Enjoyable story. This was a good way to start my day. |
susiepip | 2009.12.30 - 11:37AM | 1: Happy Christmas | Signed |
No, It's all right: the British Father Christmas is rather portly. Enjoyable story - thank you. |
verasuspense | 2009.12.26 - 11:45AM | 1: Happy Christmas | Signed |
Actually, the traditional British Father Christmas IS skinny, and he wears a red robe with a hood, rather than a suit and tuque. I take it Severus didn't suddenly sprout a white beard :-D
Author's Response: Ah, that's interesting. The description I got from wiki describes him this way: Father Christmas often appears as a large man, often around 70 years old. He is dressed in a red or green snowsuit trimmed with white fur, a matching hat and dark boots. Often he carries a large brown sack filled with toys on his back.
Lol. No, Snape didn't sprout a beard, although that would have been hilarious if he had. :) |
Rosmerta | 2009.12.23 - 04:28PM | 1: Happy Christmas | Signed |
The perfect Christmas ficlet! I love the notion of SkinnySanta!Snape. :D |
mmh | 2009.12.23 - 04:06PM | 1: Happy Christmas | Signed |
*grins* She gets to be a present, and gets her own, presumably in the form of the vigorous attentions of the potions master. Will he need to slip a few vials of purple potion into her stocking? ;^) |
Cybrokat | 2009.12.23 - 12:26PM | 1: Happy Christmas | Signed |
So, the place device was a bit thin but I assume it's because it was just to get to a certain place. Also, you say that Santa is unconscious, and then 5 lines later, say he is still conscious, lol.
However, I love Hermione being wrapped in a bow. Their responses were very real to me. And I love it ended on the hint of whats to come. (Who doesn't find him undoing buttons f'ing hot?) I also laughed at him telling the reindeer, "Let's go" when he doesn't remember the names, lol. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Lol. I did catch the "unconscious" error this morning but didn't fix it thinking the story would go back into queue. Changing it to semi-conscious ought to work. The plot was thin, but it was just a little one shot meant to bring a smile. Thank you for reading it. :) |
JudithsFancy | 2009.12.23 - 11:55AM | 1: Happy Christmas | Signed |
The Hallelujah Chorus will be delayed until...three, two, one...CONTACT!
Merry Christmas to all and to the naughty author who has given me many hours of pleasure...through reading. Ahem JF |
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