Reviews for Just a Naughty Little Ficlet
MistressOfSheep | 2009.12.23 - 10:56AM | 4: Riding the Snape Express | Signed |
Girl, you know how to write. I like my Postions Master snarky and mean. You made my day. Thanks for writing this :) |
ElwingWitch | 2009.10.11 - 05:52PM | 4: Riding the Snape Express | Signed |
sobsob:( is it already finished???!!I want mooooreee!!Please write a sequel!!I loved this fic! |
Kittens | 2009.10.11 - 09:49AM | 4: Riding the Snape Express | Signed |
Oh, please don't stop!! |
Ember7 | 2009.10.10 - 06:07PM | 4: Riding the Snape Express | Signed |
Wow! That was incredibly hot! I cannot wait to read more! |
Andrea_Snape | 2009.10.08 - 11:48PM | 4: Riding the Snape Express | Signed |
WOW!!!!! Thank you! My husband read that and he even agreed that was hot. He does not do that often. Keep them coming. |
Wren | 2009.10.08 - 03:07AM | 4: Riding the Snape Express | Signed |
That was one of the hottest scenes I have ever read, not because of the actions but because of the dirty talk. I have rarely seen Snape portrayed as awesomely articulate as you just did; it took an ordinary scene and really spiced it up. Smut-tastic job. |
Half Blood Outcast | 2009.10.07 - 09:03PM | 4: Riding the Snape Express | Signed |
hmmm, that end is definitely a perfect opening for a sequel!!!! *hint hint* and i thoroughly enjoyed this, dear! i'll be coming back to read it again and again!! |
tonksinger | 2009.10.07 - 06:33PM | 2: In the Hands of the Potions Master | Signed |
I like the premise of this and, as always, the smut promises to be hot.
However, one line struck a nerve with me: “No! Of course not,” Hermione responded. “Only nasty witches do that.”
I feel that this is an opinion that might be voiced by a very conservative 12-year old girl, not a modern, intelligent, 20-something woman who has agreed to a one-night stand with a former professor. I could understand if Hermione hadn't yet performed fellatio or did not like doing so, but such a harsh judgment on the act seems very dated and immature. I realize the innocent/corrupt contrast you are setting up between Hermione and Snape, but I feel that goes a little too far.
Again, I enjoy your storyline and smut, but this line struck a nerve with me.
Author's Response: Precisely why I added it. There are a lot of women who won't admit to the act, and I just wanted to dip into that. There's nothing wrong with Fellatio, but there's still stigma attached to it. It's not my personal view, but it is what it is. I just tagged it a little. That you found it disturbing means I did what I hoped to do. |
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