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| anguis_1 | 2016.07.17 - 06:38PM | 2: The Science of Flying | Signed |
| Lovely fic with an interesting, measured pace (or perhaps it's the characters themselves who give this impression). Also, I must say that I appreciate an original character who is likable and, despite being the narrator, doesn't try to steal center stage. | |||
| jeanjeanvaljean | 2014.11.09 - 02:57PM | 2: The Science of Flying | Signed |
| Very beautiful writing! | |||
| Lunautilus | 2014.09.27 - 02:39AM | 1: The Visitor | Signed |
| Wonderful story. I truly enjoyed not only the use of third person, but the character as well. The pacing and style is very charming. | |||
| vanimiel | 2014.08.04 - 11:48PM | 2: The Science of Flying | Signed |
| I do, I believe this story it's beautiful thank you, keep please doing this, you are such a good author | |||
| raj | 2014.07.25 - 02:05PM | 2: The Science of Flying | Signed |
| This is such a lovely story. | |||
| Maria | 2014.07.21 - 03:21AM | 2: The Science of Flying | Signed |
| I read this all the way through because it was compelling enough, yet there are some nit-picky things that kind of ruined the flow for me. One, I can't buy into professors addressing each other as 'Miss' so-and-so. *Maybe* the old professors that taught Hermione, but no way would this 'unfailingly polite' Hermione call Professor Gillespie 'Miss Gilesspie'. And besides, in the canon there's a strict decorum observed at Hogwarts and the wizarding world in general. Two, I can't picture Hermione and Susan sitting there in a public staff room discussing such private things. For that matter, I can't believe Severus and Hermione were so blasse about speaking like that to each other in front of Susan, whether they thought she was asleep or not. Also, due to the third person observation I'm left with so many questions! Overall this was an interesting take on the HG/SS post-voldy relationship. Author's Response: I believe it says in the story that Miss Gillespie is an apprentice, not a professor, so Hermione and the rest of the staff address her as such, just as they call Susan "Miss" because the latter isn't a proper professor. Also, I think it was clear from the first chapter that so far Snape had had a very hard time getting Hermione alone--Hermione ignores his letters and visibly makes an attempt to avoid being alone with him, even dragging Susan along with them--which was probably why their nine-month long, silent, one-sided argument dragged out for as long as it did. This to me explains why he snatched at the first opportunity to discuss things with her even though they weren't, strictly speaking, alone, but whether you accept that explanation is up to you. Thank you for the rest of your comments. | |||
| loreen77 | 2014.07.20 - 04:51PM | 2: The Science of Flying | Signed |
| Great job. I liked the pov. Well done! Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I often find that a third-person point of view is easier to write. | |||
| loreen77 | 2014.07.20 - 04:50PM | 1: The Visitor | Signed |
| Great start. I am glad i found this once it is completed so i could run off to the final chapter. Author's Response: Thank you for your review! | |||
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