Reviews for Unchanged
adelgado | 2013.06.21 - 02:19PM | 9: Coming Clean | Signed |
Glad it got straightened out. but he practically tells her in chapter three. so why did she respond so negatively. or did I miss read? |
jrzygirl12 | 2011.02.18 - 03:47AM | 9: Coming Clean | Signed |
So sweet, thank you!!! |
fynnsmom | 2010.07.30 - 01:18PM | 5: Let the Games Begin | Signed |
I think it's good to keep Severus guessing. Great chapter. |
fynnsmom | 2010.07.30 - 12:50PM | 4: Unforgiven | Signed |
I'm sure you're not reading comments anymore but I agree that it is a good idea to get Severus more into character. He's a little too soft--although I think you've got the lack of self-confidence around women on target. Great chapter. |
fynnsmom | 2010.07.30 - 09:06AM | 3: Return To Me | Signed |
Albus is always the matchmaker isn't he? I really can't see Severus being involved with a woman who looks like the common standard of beautiful. Great chapter. |
fynnsmom | 2010.07.30 - 08:41AM | 2: Time Goes By So Slowly | Signed |
Hermione never would've known if she didn't try applying for a teaching position. Maybe students will now learn something about history rather than falling asleep listening to a droning Binns. Great chapter. |
fynnsmom | 2010.07.30 - 08:20AM | 1: My Confession | Signed |
This chapter makes me wonder just how many opportunities are lost and never realized just because we're afraid to speak up. Great chapter. |
10101010 | 2009.05.23 - 06:10PM | 7: Truth Revealed | Signed |
lol, big mistake severus! |
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