Reviews for Turn of the Tide
sevspet | 2010.01.31 - 04:21AM | 1: Turn of the Tide | Signed |
What an openning chapter! I loved that scene. I could see him leaning over the table, the smirk. Her twisting round "I DIDN"T SAY YES!" HA! Loved it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Looking back, it could've been better, but it's nice to hear someone was able to visualize it :) |
verasuspense | 2010.01.19 - 12:11PM | 2: Extending Invitations | Signed |
I hope the undercover job that prompted Hermione's makeover doesn't involve cosying up to one of the Malfoys :-(
Author's Response: I don't want to reveal anything yet, but... well, I guess I'll ease your suffering and tell you the Malfoys make no appearance in this story... as of yet, but they have nothing to do with Hermione's assignment. It's been done, and I'm tired of seeing Lucius as the catch-all for evil plots. |
Sampdoria | 2010.01.19 - 04:59AM | 2: Extending Invitations | Signed |
Great update, I felt my toes curl in joy when Hermione laughed at Rons patetich attempts at seduction. I like your "new" Severus, I find it quite thinkable that surviving Nagini and getting a new chance of life would make him recognise and take a chance on the happiness he was denied before.
Author's Response: hehe, Hermione laughing at Ron seems to make a lot of people happy! And the new Severus is still going to have problems... but you'll see. Thanks for the review and your thoughts! :) |
Tessa85 | 2010.01.19 - 04:06AM | 2: Extending Invitations | Signed |
Lovely shades of both characters, very touching.
Author's Response: Thanks! Appreciate your review. |
neelix | 2010.01.19 - 02:58AM | 2: Extending Invitations | Signed |
This is great - and I'd like to add my thanks to Lloyd1957 for spurring you on! Please keep going!
Author's Response: Thank you! And you will certainly see more over the next few days! |
verasuspense | 2010.01.19 - 12:53AM | 2: Extending Invitations | Signed |
A small niggle: "if things we different" should be "were different".
Author's Response: Ack! Thanks so much for pointing that out, I thought I'd changed it! Appreciate your help. |
indigo_rose | 2010.01.18 - 05:18PM | 1: Turn of the Tide | Signed |
I just found this on the Random Fic link, and wanted to let you know that I'm really intrigued by your beginning! I hope that Real Life and the elusive muse will allow you to write more on this...remember, for every person who actually reviews, there's probably at least 15 or so people who didn't but who also liked it. Don't keep us hanging! I'd love to know how the "date" goes... :-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for leaving a review! I posted the second chapter so it should be up any day now :) |
Loyd1957 | 2010.01.15 - 11:50AM | 1: Turn of the Tide | Signed |
Hey, don't ignore this story. You start the most remarkable stories with scenes that draw the reader in as if they are watching a movie. Please, please, please don't leave us hanging.
Author's Response: You are seriously making me feel really great today! Thanks so much for the awesome reviews! I want to continue this, I just felt like with people's responses perhaps no one would like it. |
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