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Reviews for Turn of the Tide

Velvet2010.03.27 - 10:46PM6: Choreographing TrustsSigned
awww yay for admiting feelings :) go sev! Enjoying it so far keep it coming!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, glad you're enjoying it :)

Loyd19572010.03.27 - 09:35PM6: Choreographing TrustsSigned
That was so perfect. The ending to that chapter was just spot on perfect. No miscommunication, she said what she felt and glad Severus heard it. Now, though what will he do knowing her mission.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you thought so, have been wanting to hear your thoughts. I'm writing as I answer this, so we'll see what Severus decides soon!

HellHathNoFury32010.03.27 - 09:20PM1: Turn of the TideSigned
I'm gonna gush here. I absolutely love how you have given Hermojne's friendships attention. Many submissions mention the canon characters just to keep the feel of the story, but the way you have put personalities into Hermoine and Ginny, Ginny and Harry, and Ron and Hermoine is just amazing. This chapter is so hot. Her realization and reaction in the end are very realistic and I love it! Hopefully she'll let Sev help her, but I have an inkling that the Dark 'mark' *hehe, bad pun* may have a little more in this than Sev would like.

Author's Response: Have I told you yet how happy your reviews make me?! Thank you SO much for noticing the friendships - it can be so hard without friends sometimes! And I'm glad you thought the chapter was hot, and her reaction are realistic, because - ask my Beta - I was SO worried about it, wondering what the readers would think. Thanks so much for your wonderful reviews, I really do hope you continue to enjoy the story!

HellHathNoFury32010.03.27 - 05:38PM6: Choreographing TrustsSigned
I'm writing a pre-emptive review after reading your note, but before the chapter. I'm thrilled that you're still taking time out for what you *and we, ahem* love even while you're so busy. Hoping things get better!

Author's Response: I'm hoping you enjoy the chapter as well, but thank you SO MUCH for this little note. You have no idea how much I appreciate this comment.

verasuspense2010.03.27 - 04:58PM6: Choreographing TrustsSigned
How nice of Harry to ask his friend to whore for him. If the Dark Wizard was gay, would he send Ron?

Author's Response: Apparently a lot of readers were upset by this - and rightly so, if it were indeed the case - but that isn't what her assignment is about. I'll explain in a next author's note.

verasuspense2010.03.27 - 04:43PM1: Turn of the TideSigned
I don't understand your reply "She Apparates to them". Who is "them'? Where does she Apparate?

Author's Response: Sorry, you were commenting on another chapter, not the one I thought you were commenting on.

Author's Response: And it occurs to me it still doesn't answer your question, yes? haha. I think you were asking, doesn't Severus need her address if he's taking her out? (I thought you were referring to the end of Chapter 3, when it's decided she'll come to Hogwarts for dinner.) Hermione Apparates (in both cases) to Severus, not the other way around. Chapter 6 is the first time he actually needs her address.

gifarlme2010.03.27 - 02:35PM6: Choreographing TrustsSigned
oh that was lovely.....I hope he can help. Poor Hermione!

Author's Response: Thanks! And remember... I'm a romantic ;)

SerafineSnape2010.03.22 - 09:03AM5: Proposing PleasuresSigned
Keep up the great work! I like how you've maintained the characterization to canon, and I'm intrigued as to where this story will go. Methinks an explosion from Ron might be in the future haha! Can hardly wait for the next update!

Author's Response: This made my day, thanks so much! Update should be coming soon, been having some setbacks. But thank you so much for the review!

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