Reviews for Camerado
Vesper Bell | 2016.02.05 - 08:55AM | 36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2) | Signed |
I'm both thrilled and sad to see this story conclude- thrilled because I've been waiting in suspense for and ending for so long, and sad because I just don't want it to end.
This fic has been a pleasure to read, and I really appreciate the psychological realism of the characters' relationships, especially the way you've written Hermione's friendship with Harry and Ron. Congratulations to you (and your beta!) for your perseverance and elegant storytelling.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! |
MeliJ | 2016.02.04 - 07:54PM | 36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2) | Signed |
I cried sooooo much these last two chapters, but this one especially. You really know how to work one's heart!! I loved this story, I loved this ending!! So very well done, it was amazing!! I hope to read something else from you :D
Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot. |
fedora_girl | 2016.01.19 - 10:22AM | 34: My call is the call of battle | Signed |
Update asap, please! I'm on tenterhooks! |
Violet_P_Snape | 2016.01.08 - 10:14PM | 9: Accepted | Signed |
Hello again, about 3/4 of the way through this chapter where Hermione joins the order, the story starts to jump a bit. She talks about things after a few days and then goes back to that night for tea. I haven't read further yet, however I've tried. This bit should come after as a flashback perhaps instead of where it's at in the story. |
Violet_P_Snape | 2016.01.07 - 11:27PM | 3: I whimper no more | Signed |
I've just started your story and see that not only is it incomplete but you've updated recently as well.
So far the story has interested me and I waiting for the grip of 'one more chapter before bed'.
Normally I don't bother with reviewing as many stories are abandoned or the author hasn't written anything in years.
I hope to encourage you to continue as thus far you're writing has promise. |
poisonprincess | 2015.12.24 - 06:13AM | 34: My call is the call of battle | Signed |
I love your story so so much. I love the way you handle the characters. Severus and Hermione are spot on. And Ron's reaction in this chapter is so very well done. I really crave more of that. Please let Hermione sleep and when she wakes up, she hopefully has a message from Severus ;-) Keep up the good work! I hope you're making good progress on the new chapter... |
grissomesque | 2015.12.23 - 06:05PM | 34: My call is the call of battle | Signed |
Ommggggg I've been reading this for days. Just got to the not-end and exclaimed, out loud, "oh my god."
So well written. I so wish you'd finished this. |
Loyd1957 | 2015.11.23 - 07:23PM | 34: My call is the call of battle | Signed |
Ah maginificent story. You had me almost biting my nails in this last chapter. I never know if an author is going to go the true route of the story and have Severus die and Hermione would live lost without him, or if he would survive. I love that last part of Malfoy making a deal and him holding her eyes until he is taken away. Awesome story. |
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