Reviews for Camerado
| Veritas51 | 2016.02.18 - 02:37PM | 36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2) | Signed |
| Thanks so much for Camerado! I'm sorry to have not given you encouragement along the way, but the frustration of unfinished works is so great that I wait to read stories after they have finished. Thank you for the realistic characters and dialogue. No super-Hermione or quick-to-fall-in-love Serverus, but the slow building of a relationship between two people who are separated by boundaries of age and position at the beginning. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2016.02.17 - 02:02AM | 36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2) | Signed |
| I've enjoyed CAMERADO so much. Your writing style is a pleasure to read. I understand why you ended it where you did, but I'm so greedy, I hated to see it end. I hope maybe someday you'll be inspired to give us a short follow-up story, maybe three to five chapters that give us a bit more of this particular SS/HG universe. I'll just miss your writing. There aren't as many who can write such believable characters in keeping with canon personalities as you and a relative handful of others. Hermione's a Mary Sue, or the sex is ridiculously unrealistic, or there's distracting writing errors--but your stuff has none of that. If you ever do decide to write something else here, please know there are a lot of us who will cheer! Thanks for all your hard work; it's been a real pleasure to read it. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2016.02.17 - 01:28AM | 35: Will you come travel with me? (Part 1) | Signed |
| The new Minister of Magic is a real disappointment to us readers as well as Harry and Hermione (and anyone of intelligence in the wizarding community). I guess I've been spoiled by other stories where Kingley or Arthur is able to set things to rights where Severus is concerned. This being too much like reality is depressing! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2016.02.17 - 01:22AM | 35: Will you come travel with me? (Part 1) | Signed |
| loreen77 was right about your Draco dialog. It sounded very true to character. Likewise your Harry, Hermione and Ron. This story is so good, and I will miss it when it's gone. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2016.02.17 - 01:07AM | 34: My call is the call of battle | Signed |
| Poor Hermione--and everyone! It's just it wasn't enough, that they all had to go through all of that terrible morass of the final battle. Now there's all the individual and collective trying to get oneself and one's group, whether family or friends, together, and of course it's not going smoothly. Very well done chapter. |
| Spitfire21 | 2016.02.16 - 12:56PM | 36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2) | Signed |
| I recently came back to this story and was pleasantly surprised to see it completed. Thank you for sharing this wonderful tale with us. You're definitely a master of your craft! |
| ninive | 2016.02.15 - 11:26AM | 36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2) | Signed |
| I really loved reading this story. Congratulations. |
| ninive | 2016.02.15 - 11:25AM | 36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2) | Signed |
| I really loved reading this story. Congratulations. |
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