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Reviews for Camerado

drakos42009.09.15 - 11:11AM9: AcceptedSigned
Just discovered your story and read all 9 chapters in one go and now I can hardly wait for the rest!!! Your characters are marvelous. It's hard to imagine a truer to canon Snape or Hermione. i love how their relationship and understanding of each other develope ever so slowly - but steadily! Gimme more!

Author's Response: I'm so, so glad you find them in-character. I really appreciate that you took the time to review--I'm hoping to finish the next part soon (little things like my job keep taking up too much time :-)

ColdVixen2009.09.14 - 09:49PM9: AcceptedSigned
Looking forward to more. Youre last sentance does truly say it all

Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully I'll get the next chapter up fairly soon.

sifferi2009.09.13 - 03:42AM8: Thoughts in the darknessSigned
A truly powerful ending in this chapter. Gave me the chills.

Author's Response: Oh my, thank you!

verasuspense2009.09.12 - 09:35PM9: AcceptedSigned
How typical of Dumbledore that *he's* the only one who can send messages through the pendants.

Author's Response: Oh, Dumbledore. . . Thank you for reading!

Jong_Kahn2009.09.12 - 08:43PM9: AcceptedSigned
"Nothing is different. You're just starting to see." Whoa! Says it all! Excellent chapter. Look forward to the next--thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews--they're always a great motivator!

Green Aurora2009.09.12 - 12:24AM8: Thoughts in the darknessSigned
I miss reading this story, even though it has been less than a month since an update... you should write more soon! :D

Author's Response: I'm trying! I just started a new job, so I'm afraid my writing time is being impeded :-) I will make an effort not to let too long go between chapters, though. Thank you for reading!

Harmony Bites2009.08.28 - 05:57PM8: Thoughts in the darknessSigned
He had used the word intimacy in that first lesson, but this had the potential to go far beyond the common bounds of intimacy and even decency. Physical intimacy was a concept with which he was acquainted, however distantly; likewise with the intimacy of the mind and emotions between friends and family. This was something else; this was intimacy of the soul, really, and he did not want it. I felt that way in just the contrast between first and second reads of the HP series--I know the first time I read of Sirius bumping Snape's head against the shack's ceiling I found it funny. Nice use of that in how Hermione feels in re-experiencing the incident. And I liked the moments of connection between them at the end of his chapter--credible--and conflicted and contrary Snape maybe be. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

Author's Response: I know what you mean; I didn't have much of a reaction to the Shack incident the first time I read Book 3, but it really is pretty awful.

Harmony Bites2009.08.28 - 05:39PM7: The profound lesson of receptionSigned
He had used the word intimacy in that first lesson, but this had the potential to go far beyond the common bounds of intimacy and even decency....This was something else; this was intimacy of the soul, really, and he did not want it. I like how your credibly using the Occlumency lessons for them to begin to know and understand each other, and I was struck by how you pointed out that, assuming Snape took lessons from Dumbledore, that Dumbledore would often peek in, that indeed no one would know him better, that he would be very exposed. Several other moments I liked--Hermione's smile and his response to it was telling, and the allusion to Amortentia... interesting.

Author's Response: :-)

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