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verasuspense2010.02.08 - 11:57AM12: These yearnings why are they?Signed
Poor naive Hermione expected the Order to actually DO something ? Maybe now she will realize that it exists to flatter Dumbledore's ego by nodding at every pronouncement he makes as though its the higher wisdom. Are you going to stick to canon, or will Hermione come up with a plan ?

Author's Response: It's always been puzzling to me that the Order seemed to do so little to stop the attacks in Harry's sixth year. I don't see Hermione sitting quietly by, it seems against her nature. . . ;-)

Sinister2010.02.08 - 10:20AM12: These yearnings why are they?Signed
Wow, this was intense. But I loved it, great story! Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it.

sifferi2010.02.08 - 05:15AM12: These yearnings why are they?Signed
Human emotions are complicated and I think you have captured that perfectly. Hermione is so believably young, naive and full of ideals, it is easy to remember that age and identify with that state of mind. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you think Hermione is believable; I'm definitely leery of falling into the trap of writing her as a forty year-old in a seventeen year-old's body. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

annabelle2010.02.08 - 12:45AM12: These yearnings why are they?Signed
YES!! I have been checking studiously for an update and boy did this chapter not disappoint! The way you write Severus Snape is so deeply fantastic I am not sure where to begin! I love the lines you wrote about him changing his posture during the order meeting as he contemplates the different treatment he gets there versus with the death eaters. The exchanges you write been hermione and severus are also so refreshingly believable and fun. The way he shifts between tones when interacting with her makes perfect sense. I loved how you had him sit next to her in his exhaustion--brilliant moment! On a different note, I admit I was quite disappointed when this story was not nominated for best WIP and when you didn't win best new author, but honestly if you keep up the fantastic work on thistreasure I imagine the everyone who reads it will realize what I already know--that this is one of a kind in its wonderful realistic as well as creative writing. The way you show the characters thoughts combined with the dialogue is all perfectly on point totally believeable (the plot is also great). God, I love the moment where Hermione smiles at him and Snape feels his heart thud and swears to himself, so perfect!! I realize this may be a gushy review, but where I might normally keep it short I decided that since I want you to take the time to keep working on this story I should take a few minutes to more fully express how great I think this is and how you absolutely must continue. I hope more will be coming in the near future! I absolutely salivate at the slow but undeniable build between Hermione and Severus, you are handling them like a pro! Update again as soon!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for leaving such a wonderful, lengthy review! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond to it--real life has gotten busy. I am working on the next chapter, however, and hopefully it will be done fairly soon. Thank you for reading :-)

RyeBreadToast2010.02.07 - 10:23AM11: The shuddering, longing ache of contactSigned
Love this story! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter will be up in a few days.

seffina2010.02.06 - 04:31PM11: The shuddering, longing ache of contactSigned
*impatiently waits for the next chapter* I read this again last night and I absolutely cannot wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: The next chapter is with the admins now, hopefully it'll be up in the next few days. Thank you for reading :-)

annabelle2010.01.18 - 10:14PM11: The shuddering, longing ache of contactSigned
This is one of my favorite stories. You are a wonderful writer and every time I look for updates I look for you story because it is one of the prized few I would bounce out of my seat with excitement to see updated and that I look for each time. I hope more is coming soon because I cannot wait to see where you take this treasure! Basically I am trying to politely beg you for more!

Author's Response: Thank you for such a wonderful review :-) I'm *almost* done with the next chapter, so hopefully it'll be posted sometime within the next week, admins willing!

snpgrl28862010.01.13 - 08:10PM11: The shuddering, longing ache of contactSigned
One of my favorites so far. Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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