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aurora borealis2010.12.01 - 04:45PM17: Rough new prizes (Part 2)Signed
" . . I do not actually wish to die.” (Severus, nobody wanted you to die except JKR, evil woman that she is.) What a lovely chapter. Despite Dumbledore's instructions to Severus, it sounds as if an intelligent young Gryffindor will be able to do what no one else in the Order tried to do - see through the charade of Severus killing Dumbledore. How Dumbledore expected Snape to tell Harry that Harry had to die, when Harry loathed him and no one in the Order trusted him is beyond me; your Snape makes an excellent point when he asks how is to function as the Order's spy after Dumbledore is dead. That JKR could leave Snape so alone and friendless still infuriates me. I like your version much better. This is so beautifully written - I love how you get into Snape's soul and express his fears, his exhaustion, his loneliness. I am always glad to find a new chapter has been posted!

Author's Response: The more I think about the things Dumbledore demanded of Snape, the more bizarre the whole thing seems to me. I'm very happy that you liked the chapter, and Snape's character. Thank you!

seffina2010.12.01 - 03:39PM17: Rough new prizes (Part 2)Signed
As always, amazing. What I particularly liked was their companionship before they started the discussion about charming bracelets. The time passing as they read was great. Your Snape with his ever present irritation is great. His constant head hurting, how quickly he gets humiliated, the desperate need yet scorn of live and affection... he's just so breathtaking. Thank you so much for an update. And as much as I've tried to not ask for updates, I'll make the request this time. You left us hanging, so if it's at all feasible, I would love to read more soon. If not, I shall patiently wait. Again, thank you! I've read the two chapters thrice already!

Author's Response: I will try to write the next chapter more quickly! Thank you for reviewing, and I'm very glad you liked it :-)

Ehann2010.12.01 - 01:25PM17: Rough new prizes (Part 2)Signed
OMG, this last chapter was KILLER. YOur writing is so good, I am really really hoping and praying you keep writing it. I must know what happens! Great job.

Author's Response: I have every intention of finishing this. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Althea Grey2010.12.01 - 01:03PM17: Rough new prizes (Part 2)Signed
What a wonderful update! I like your Snape very much. Thank you.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like him. Thank you for reviewing.

verasuspense2010.12.01 - 10:34AM16: Rough new prizes (Part 1)Signed
Why was everyone glaring ar Snape ? I could understand Molly doing it, and Arthur ( even though Ron IS a gluttonous ass) , and of course Moody glares at him as a matter of course, but what's wrong with the rest of them ?

Author's Response: Honestly, I think a lot of the Order members would automatically take Molly and Arthur's side rather than Snape's, particularly if he'd just insulted their son just after his near-death. Thank you for reading!

Jong_Kahn2010.12.01 - 06:07AM17: Rough new prizes (Part 2)Signed
What a letter perfect way to end the chapter. Whew! Quiet, yet intense as hell--just perfect. How I thank you for writing this, and appreciate your having given us two chapters tonight. Your story is one of the very best here, and well worth waiting for. Thank you, again.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, as always!

Jong_Kahn2010.12.01 - 02:52AM16: Rough new prizes (Part 1)Signed
Whoa! At least Snape was as prudent as always, in toeing the official faculty line (i.e., covering his butt) where Dumbledore was concerned. How much did Dumbledore actually hear? Well, we"ll just have to find out, won"t we?! Good chapter!

Author's Response: We will, indeed ;-)

Allyll2010.12.01 - 01:13AM17: Rough new prizes (Part 2)Signed
Wow!! This chapter was worth the wait. I was thinking just the other day how I wanted to read another chapter of your story, it is really well written and frankly I can´t wait for the next chapter. The way you play with the original plot is amaizing!

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was worth the wait; I know I've been a lot slower about updting lately. Thanks for letting me know!

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