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pommekitty2011.05.07 - 04:15AM18: Venture not--if you leave me, you are lostSigned
Oh boy, I gulped this down and now I need to re-read it and savor it. Thank you so much for updating. The flow of this story seems so natural. The way things happen, the way feelings evolve, the yearning for something Snape and Hermione don't wan't to admit to themselves....perfect. And how brilliant was that little private bubble at the end of the chapter! A safe place away from the eyes of the world. How very telling it was that Snape's first action was to allow himself to look at Hermione with something else than the impersonal way of a teacher. From the way he's so unsure that she could care anything for him emotionally, he's sure to be devastated by the physical longing that seems to be creeping up on him more and more. I feel very cruel for looking forward to reading about his anguish but you write Snape so beautifully that I can't help myself :o)

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review! I am very happy that you liked the "bubble" at the end, and Snape taking advantage of it, if only for a moment.

Jessabel272011.05.07 - 02:44AM18: Venture not--if you leave me, you are lostSigned
I have been waiting for an update to this story, and it was completely worth it! Of all the HG/SS WIP's I'm reading right now, this is definitely my favorite. The characterization, plot, and pace is perfect. I LOVE that they have progressed to something like friendship, and even more, I love the glimpses we get towards something more. I know RL is a pain, but I hope to see another update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the pace; I'm trying to keep it realistically slow, but still moving forward. Thank you for reading and letting me know what you think!

ScarlettAngel2011.05.07 - 02:34AM18: Venture not--if you leave me, you are lostSigned
Thank you so much for the update. This is fantastically crafted into cannon and definitely one of my favorites.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!

christev2011.04.21 - 11:45AM17: Rough new prizes (Part 2)Signed
I came across this absolutely marvelous story through someone's Favorites list, and for some reason was thinking it was an old fic, rather than a recent WIP. So I'm very sorry I haven't reviewed all the way along. This is simply wonderful. The premise makes so much sense - of course Hermione would be envious of Harry's lessons, and would excel where he'd failed. Your writing has captivated me, and I eagerly await updates, hoping that your RL graciously allows it!

Author's Response: It did always seem odd to me that Hermione never really expressed much envy when Harry got the opportunity to learn something so advanced. Thank you so much for letting me know you like it so far!

gossipgirly2222011.04.16 - 02:11AM17: Rough new prizes (Part 2)Signed
So I just discovered this story and it has become my new favorite! Seriously, you have got the characters' personalities down so perfectly and your pace (of the romance/friendship of Severus and Hermione) is impeccable! Please, Please, Please tell me that you will be completing this story! :)

Author's Response: I definitely plan to complete it (as quickly as RL allows!) I'm so glad you like it so far, thanks for taking the time to tell me :-)

pommekitty2011.03.13 - 03:06AM17: Rough new prizes (Part 2)Signed
Please, please, please, can you tell us how you're doing? It's not like you not to answer reviews for such a long time and I hope everything is okay for you in real life.

Author's Response: So sorry to not answer for so long! RL has been complicated recently, so the next chapter is going much more slowly even than usual. I apologize for keeping you waiting, and thank you, truly, for your concern.

kloyc2011.02.16 - 08:01AM1: PrologueSigned
Seriously one of the most in-character stories I've read in a long time. It's so believable, and I couldn't tear myself away from it. I look forward to it continuing!

Author's Response: I'm glad you find the story in-character; that's one of the things I'm really striving for, so it's good to hear you think I'm doing it well.

seffina2011.02.14 - 02:54PM17: Rough new prizes (Part 2)Signed
Hoping an update is upcoming soon! For some reason, it being Valentine's Day made me yearn more of this story. Hope all is well and sorry for bothering re: an update, but we all have our weaknesses. :)

Author's Response: So sorry I couldn't get you an update for Valentine's Day ;-) I am working on the next chapter.

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