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Reviews for Camerado

Awapuhi2016.09.11 - 11:00AM36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2)Signed
What a masterful and overwhelming story! I've been enjoying it immensely. Surprisingly, I've never seen it before and came across it as "Complete" already, so much better for me, because to wait for this story to unfold for years would be a torture, really:) Thank you very much for such a great work, so fullfilled and nicely written! The ending was somewhat abrupt for me, though Hermione's decision not to restore her parents' memories seems just right in place. And yet...and yet...I'm craving for a tiny short "Epilogue"-chapter to witness Severus' and Hermione's embrace once more and piercing happiness of their reunion :)

Leraiv Snape2016.09.07 - 07:11PM36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2)Signed
I have been reading this for years, I think since the early chapters, and I have always loved the way Half-Blood Prince and Deathly Hallows are woven in. I've also always enjoyed the depth and gradual growth of their relationship - it was very much true-to-life, as much as it could be. That being said, I have to join others in saying that this ending seems a bit...abrupt. Not that it is a poor direction to take the characters, but an epilogue or follow-up would be lovely. Her decision not to re-claim her parents, to have essentially orphaned herself, is a weighty one, and it feels a bit like it's dropped on us. Having the chance to reflect on it more would definitely be a plus. I would also like to see a bit more of her relationship with Snape. I have no objections to anything you've done with it - just a request to give it a slightly more finished part that feels like an ending. All being said and done, excellent work over all and I hope that writing an original work goes spectacularly!

Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely, thoughtful review. I actually have plans for a short story companion to Camerado, but right now I'm working on a Pride and Prejudice story that I've promised myself I'll finish first. So it might be a little while, but I promise I intend to write a little more in this world :-)

Wine witch2016.07.20 - 07:15PM36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2)Signed
Thanks for this wonderful story!

EmmaM2016.07.17 - 06:46AM36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2)Signed
Loved your story all the way through... Though, I would have wanted to see their reunion O:-)

EmmaM2016.07.17 - 06:46AM36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2)Signed
Loved your story all the way through... Though, I would have wanted to see their reunion O:-)

munchiedi2016.07.07 - 10:08AM36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2)Signed
Waiting for baited breath seem futile now. The ending is...it really gave me headache. Too many possibilities. But with Hermione's personality I wouldn't be surprised if she Apparate or book a portkey to France right now. This kind of closure is a bit of torture and effective as its easy to interpret. And for that, I must thank you. It might sound ungrateful but really Thank You. :)

munchiedi2016.07.07 - 04:33AM30: To eat and sleep with the earth (Part 2)Signed
So their official status is now of 'star-crossed lovers'. Such irony, to welcome love and see the Grim Reaper waiting at the other side of the door. Though I know they will persevere in the end. Its still painful to know the truth behind such intricate machinations.

munchiedi2016.07.06 - 10:45PM24: Behold a secret silent loathing and despairSigned
Okay, that was a rude question. There is no edit or delete option in here. Nevermind, I just skip the last part, hence the question. As I can see (read) that Ron isn't. Gad.. why isn't there an edit option here?

Author's Response: lol, no worries :)

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