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Reviews for Camerado

kate28052013.02.15 - 09:05AM24: Behold a secret silent loathing and despairSigned
Wow, I've found this story yesterday and now I've found MYSELF looking for a quick update! It's so well written, I'm so glad that the relationship between Hermione and Snape is slowly evoluating. I hate HG/SS fanficks all about sex and desire, your story is a very nice and wise contrast. And I hope that Severus will use Lucky Potion before his encounter with Nagini :) I've read someone's review about Hermione's natural behavior - I agree. Somehow you made this story romantic and real, tragic. You developed characters really well. "I am in hell" - it's breaking my heart. Keep up great work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope to have the next chapter finished more quickly than this one was :-)

Proulxes2013.02.04 - 01:24AM24: Behold a secret silent loathing and despairSigned
Wonderful, wonderful! An update! I love this story; it is beautifully written - the slow burn of their relationship, the characterisation, the plotting... Just... spectacular. Loved Hermione's first time, particularly as it contrasted so well with Severus' horrible experiences at school. The descriotion of his life as headmaster continues to impress. I hope that you are able to give us another chapter soon. This is the best story currently on Ash. Pxx

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!

lunarose2013.02.03 - 02:34PM24: Behold a secret silent loathing and despairSigned
Love seeing this updated! Your characterization of each person is so spot on it makes the story feel even more real. I also love the natural progression that you're taking. The pace feels completely natural instead of just rushing through and having them fall into bed together. I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Yeah, I have trouble with stories where these two relatively awkward people just jump into bed without some lead-up. I'm happy you liked the chapter! Thanks for letting me know :-)

zerzaust2013.02.03 - 12:44PM24: Behold a secret silent loathing and despairSigned
Wonderful story! I've hastened through it since last night, barely stopping for food or sleep. I really, really hope you'll update quickly! I understand that there's a lot of things in real life that can come between writing, but at least know some of us are waiting breathlessly for the rest. Thank you for creating this brilliant tale! It's so good to see fleshened out and believable situations and the characters feel so true to the books. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you find the story's progression believable.

Melusin2013.02.03 - 05:59AM24: Behold a secret silent loathing and despairSigned
lovely to see severus getting his brains shagged out by an experienced woman. He'll have a much better idea what to do with Hermione when the time comes - nothing worse than 2 virgins in bed together. A recipe for disaster in my book. I always prefer to see Hermione having some sexual experience before she gets her hands on Severus as well. Makes them equals when they finally do get down to it.Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot!

pommekitty2013.02.03 - 05:14AM24: Behold a secret silent loathing and despairSigned
I can't tell you how happy I was that you'd updated! This was a heartbreakign chapter in so many ways. When I was reading Deathly Hallows; I knew that Snape must have had a hellish year during his tenure as headmaster but reading about it from his point of view in your story makes it all so real. He's used to being hated and mocked but not quite to such a degree. It must be like living his worst nightmare and never being able to wake up. I find myself wondering how he'll react if he learns of what happened (and what will probably keep happening) between Hermione and Ron. He really doesn't need any more misery added to his plate but life isn't fair, especially for one Severus Snape. Speaking of Hemione and Ron... I would have liked her first time to be with Snape (something precious offered to him and noone else) but her decision felt natural. She's scared and exhausted. The locket is doing things to her as well. She needed to feel desired and comforted. Ron behaved exactly how I imagined he would. Thank you again for updating Camerado. It made my day when I saw that a new chapter was available :o)

Author's Response: I'm glad Hermione's decision seemed natural to you. It did to me as well, for all the reasons you outlined. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Jong_Kahn2013.02.03 - 04:45AM24: Behold a secret silent loathing and despairSigned
And the problem, as with so many young men who first practice sex under fear of discovery: get off, then roll off! Poor Hermione! And separately, poor Severus. Poor all of them, really--except for Voldy and the Death Eaters. I hope Phineas Nigellus did NOT perceive what was going on--Severus doesn't need to learn about THAT! (Although you authors regularly set up situations just like this just to have them blow up in the characters' faces!) Guess we'll find out next time! Hope it's fairly soon. Thanks so much for all your hard work. Another "10" for you!

Author's Response: Poor Hermione, indeed! And no comment on Phineas... ;-) Thank you for another thoughtful review!

suzette2013.02.03 - 04:41AM24: Behold a secret silent loathing and despairSigned
It's so wonderful to see this story updated! And what an interesting direction to have her fall into bed with Ron. I like the complications of it all: she's attracted to both and both are wonderful in different ways. And the continuing deepening of story and character for both protagonists, with your plot elements cleverly and naturally fitting into the gaps in the books, and yet offering unexpected insights, is why I've loved your story all along. I find myself wondering if you're a professional writer? If not, I'd recommend it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review! In answer to your question, I've had a few pieces of original fiction published, but I certainly don't make a living writing (though I'd love to :-)

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