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Cookies1232023.02.01 - 12:11AM1: PrologueSigned
I have read this at least 5 times through and every time I'm blown away by how perfect it is. Characters are so spot on, the plot, just UGHAHHH EVERYTHING IS PERFECT THANK YOU!!

aakmlee2021.08.02 - 07:55PM24: Behold a secret silent loathing and despairSigned
Wow what a disappointing chapter. I don't usually review just a chapter,but I have been loving this story until now. If I want too read a Hermoine/Ron story I will. I don't because I don't like that pairing. You made a deep and slow building relationship between Hermione and Severus go down the drain by having her sleep with Ron. Not only sleep with him while she is supposed to be in love with Severus but give her virginity to him. Only one word for it Disappointing. The relationship does not work if you have Hermione act like an immature hormonal adolescent instead of a controlled young adult. When you do that it makes Severus like a pedophile which is not cool.

startbynature2021.03.28 - 11:10PM36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2)Signed
Well another 2 days of nothing else in my life getting done apart from reading this ! 2nd time around for me and GOD was it worth it!!!! I love everything, everything about this story. You clearly have a gift for writing drama. I love how there’s no extra, indulgence or filler . Everything, including speech and setting is all there to propel the plot forward. It’s stands well as it is - we all know he’s gonna find her...or she him. But since I am bereft of your wonderful writing I would like to think one day you might gift us with that reunion scene playing out. Honestly? This is my new canon. ❤️

startbynature2021.03.28 - 10:05AM17: Rough new prizes (Part 2)Signed
Amazing chapter. Amazing writing and beautiful imagery.

startbynature2021.03.28 - 06:08AM8: Thoughts in the darknessSigned
I read this on my previous return to the fandom and this time I am savouring it. This chapter especially, I remember from last time. You have a wonderful gift with words.

coolarrow72020.12.06 - 01:21PM36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2)Signed
I loved this story. It’s definitely one of my favorites. I like how you intertwined the story with the original. It was very well written. However, the sudden ending was bereft of any closure. The whole story seemed like a build up to Severus and Hermione’s relationship and when it’s implied that they finally get together we are left without any of the payoff of what happened next after all the work they had done to get to that crucial point. I sure hope there is a sequel to this story!

Maggiewall2020.09.30 - 11:13PM36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2)Signed
Great fic! Wonderful! I ached to an epilogue, but it doesn't matter, the story is really great!

bccaw2020.08.14 - 01:00PM36: Will you come travel with me? (Part 2)Signed
I don't read a lot of fics through to the end, and I don't leave many reviews, but I have to let you know that I really enjoyed this story. It is well-written and I especially liked the first half, with all the detailed descriptions of Occlumency and Legilimency and the awkwardness of getting to know one another. The rest was still very good, but I did end up skimming over a lot of the scenes from the books, especially during the battle, just to get to the new stuff (just a personal preference, some people like having it all in there). My only real critique is that the ending was so drawn out and then (to me) not enough emotional payoff. Just a tiny bit more closure/hint of a their reunion would have made it *chef's kiss* perfect to me. Amazing work! Keep writing!

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