Reviews for Disintegration
| loreen77 | 2013.03.06 - 09:35PM | 2: Disintegration | Signed |
| That was the most twisted desturbing fic....your writing coveyed so much raw emotion, great job writing. Not an easy subject to discuss. 10+ |
| etherian | 2011.07.12 - 08:39PM | 2: Disintegration | Signed |
| Wow! I am just stunned by this story. My heart aches for poor Severus. I do believe it is his disintegration you have portrayed, and it is painful. A victim -- it will stay with him forever. As for Hermione, she may, someday, forget him. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2011.03.17 - 01:02AM | 2: Disintegration | Signed |
| Well written and disturbing. You have deliberately left it very ambiguous as to whether we should believe Severus' account of this, or view it as his own terrible inability to see just what he has wrought through his own inability to love. It surely seems out of character for Hermione, and Severus is certainly broken, so... Thank you for sharing your skill with us. A "10" is welcome, I trust? |
| UltraAmbiguousID | 2009.11.22 - 07:42PM | 2: Disintegration | Signed |
| Quite an interesting concept. The thoughts seemed very in character. I cannot imagine Hermione doing such a thing unless she is somehow consumed with unrequited desire prior. Perhaps, a little more leading in to the story? |
| Persevero | 2009.05.30 - 03:47AM | 2: Disintegration | Signed |
| I'm with Pearle - this is crying out for a companion piece from Hermione's POV. But how disturbing... |
| Pearle | 2009.05.29 - 10:06PM | 2: Disintegration | Signed |
| Interesting shift in perspectives. I can just imagine Severus feeling uncomfortable but flattered that she had and interest in is professional abilities. I also think he might have been blind sided just because he never would have assumed she had an interest in him considering his background. His internal dialogue speaks volumes, well done! Might we see a companion piece with Hermione's side of things? It might be interesting to enter her madness for a bit. In any event, very interesting, thanks for sharing. |
| verasuspense | 2009.05.29 - 09:56PM | 2: Disintegration | Signed |
| I'm a bit confused. Is Severus saying that Hermione used Imperio on him? That she raped him? That doesn't sound like her. Surely they could find out the truth by checking her wand. |
| regs | 2009.05.29 - 07:58AM | 2: Disintegration | Signed |
| That was very thought provoking, but I think its his disintegration not hers. |
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