Reviews for Flight of the Prince
| Green Aurora | 2010.01.20 - 10:09PM | 19: Chapter 19 | Signed |
| Please write more soon! I was so excited to see an update; I really enjoy this story. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2009.12.19 - 01:40AM | 18: Chapter 18 | Signed |
| Oh, man, what a cliffie! Excellent, excellent chapter, though! You've got all the characterizations quite believable, and the action couldn't be better--great job! (Could we possibly have another chapter for Christmas, please?..Just asking!) |
| Jong_Kahn | 2009.12.19 - 01:28AM | 17: Chapter 17 | Signed |
| Great chapter for legilimency! Am I right, suspecting that those few lines where Hermione's talking to herself (and you use the other font), it was actually Severus legilimizing her? It seemed to follow that way in the text. And I enjoyed Harry's doing same to Lavender, and your phrase "Snape would have been proud", followed by McGonagall actually being proud, too. On to the next chapter...! |
| ynnuendomercury | 2009.12.15 - 06:00PM | 18: Chapter 18 | Signed |
| You truly are a witch, for you've bewitched me with your story! More soon please! |
| ladycplum | 2009.12.13 - 10:04PM | 18: Chapter 18 | Signed |
| This has been one of the more engaging stories I've read, I'm glad you updated! |
| mmh | 2009.12.13 - 07:33PM | 18: Chapter 18 | Signed |
| When I first tried to read this story, I was disappointed that Ron turned out to be Hermione's first, when things were off to a fairly promising start. (I know that my level of disgust with Ron is a bit silly, but he reminds me of someone in RL that I often wish I could forget.) Anyway, now, I deeply regret that I spent such a long time sulking, when I could have been enjoying a really great story. I am curious about how you will deal with the silly git. Hmm... Bellatrix might be less unpleasant if she had her own pet Gryffindor to play with. Sigh... I don't suppose that will do, however. I fear it would upset Hermione, and complicate matters between her and Severus even further. Poor Draco... what shall become of him? I can't help thinking that the path of least resistance is to obliviate Rabastan, then send Draco and a hog-tied Ron back to The Burrow. |
| HalfBlood | 2009.12.13 - 05:04AM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
| I've only read the first chapter but props for giving snape a little depravity and taking a risk including some actual cannon ron/hermione. Yeah, it makes things a little more complicated for yourself writing-wise but its refreshing to see a little complexity once in a while. As for people skipping parts of your fic, thats total bull and a pretty disrespectful thing to just announce. Oh well, I'll just get back to reading shall I? :) |
| Rosmerta | 2009.12.13 - 02:20AM | 18: Chapter 18 | Signed |
| Great story! I can't believe you're not getting dozens of reviews for each chapter! I just read it all the way through for the first time and can't wait to find out what happens next. |
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