Reviews for Flight of the Prince
| breastlady | 2011.09.11 - 02:06AM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
| I think it is a great start. I didn't mind Snape and Narcissa. He used her. He didn't make love to her. I think it's important and useful that you had him go and make her take off the Unbreakable Vow. It tied a loose thread She didn't tie up. The situation with Ron and Hermione is sensible and obviously is setting the reader up for the change in her affections later. It's a weakness in Her story that Hermione would want to be with someone long term who she has nothing in common with except they love Harry. |
| sevenseeds | 2011.08.17 - 12:23PM | 22: Chapter 22 | Signed |
| Wonderful story! I'm glad you decided to skip angsty separation at the end, I thought the way you completed the story was lovely. I do feel like things were not wrapped up with Narcissa, however. Throughout the story, you used five POVs: Hermione, Severus, Ron, Harry, and Narcissa, and I think a touch of her was needed at the end, for closure and whatnot, just like the conclusions you gave the others (although I did slightly hate her for that short tryst at the beginning). I liked that you included Severus' love for Lily, and the action scenes were exciting. My mind is all over the place, there were just so many things I admired about this story. Brilliant work. |
| janeagain | 2011.05.27 - 04:57PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
| Makes perfect sense to me that he would want to make her feel used, After all, she used him, the poor sod seems to have been used by everyone. |
| Scyn | 2011.05.26 - 08:52PM | 22: Chapter 22 | Signed |
| Sweet beans! This was totally worth reading. I thought I was going to be bored with it s few chapters in because it might be slow, but you moved things along in a timely fashion. I enjoyed this story a great deal and might be up for a re-read once I'm done the others I set out. |
| Gomes | 2010.10.27 - 11:56PM | 22: Chapter 22 | Signed |
| This was absolutely brilliant. Your characterization was spot on, especially for Severus. The plot was wonderfully fleshed out, and all loose ends were tied. I held my breath during so many moments! Great climax during the battle and wonderful tender moments between Severus and Hermione. Really...thank you so much for sharing this! |
| Prefiera de Gryfalco | 2010.10.27 - 05:01PM | 22: Chapter 22 | Signed |
| Well done as always! I do feel it ended a teeny bit abruptly perhaps, but I enjoyed the build up immensely. |
| snape_lover10 | 2010.09.19 - 09:42PM | 22: Chapter 22 | Signed |
| loved it so much that i believe it needs a sequel! |
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