Reviews for Invitations and Intentions
| severus49 | 2011.04.27 - 12:16AM | 1: Invitations and Intentions | Signed |
| I'm not happy with this "let's have sex on the first date" story. I think that's incredibly stupid for anyone to do at any time - unless there's been plenty of attraction on both parts before they have even dated. There wasn't between Snape and Hermione, so to throw them in bed together on the first date when they're just getting to know each other is crappy. I mean, I didn't do that at 17, and 23 years later, I still don't think it's cool or smart. And I DO NOT think either Snape or Hermione would think of sex as throwaway as that. They should have just stayed at the restaurant and had dessert instead. |
| shelie girl | 2009.09.21 - 10:15PM | 1: Invitations and Intentions | Signed |
| Very nice way to end my evening. |
| fly_chickadee | 2009.03.01 - 07:53PM | 1: Invitations and Intentions | Signed |
| Quite real and refreshing. A pleasure to read. :) I hope to see more from you! |
| Mhari Dhu | 2009.02.27 - 03:52AM | 1: Invitations and Intentions | Signed |
| I find I'm full of affectionate chuckles. This could have been titled Severus: Forty-three going on seventeen. Bossy Hermione is right in character--I can almost feel her thinking "Somebody has to make the first move. I think it had better be me or we'll be at this stage until the 50th anniversary of the defeat!" She's very, very intelligent, but she is a Gryffindor. The dialog was superb; real people usually are exactly that awkward. Snape's, "Well, I'm done with that, where can I put it where I can promptly forget it?" attitude toward the condom was spot on male. I hope and trust that he has a quick learning curve. In short, sweet and funny and totally appreciated. |
| Tangerine Dream | 2009.02.26 - 06:11PM | 1: Invitations and Intentions | Signed |
| Great story. Definitely realistic! But very enjoyable. I love Severus' awkwardness. |
| kizzy7 | 2009.02.25 - 09:02PM | 1: Invitations and Intentions | Signed |
| Loved this. I'm in love with your Snape! Sweet, hot, perfect little evening snack. Thank you! |
| lulabelle72 | 2009.02.25 - 11:59AM | 1: Invitations and Intentions | Signed |
| I agree with some of the others, that this was paced differently and just overall written differently than what I'm used to reading; however, I found it refreshing! All right, not terribly erotic, but yet, somehow very real. I enjoyed it, and I would like to see something else from you. You have an interesting perspective. |
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