Reviews for Darkness Within
Jong_Kahn | 2009.02.13 - 12:21PM | 21: Sunshine | Signed |
Oh, do have a wedding. It doesn't have to be big; at their age and with their histories, I don't think either would want that. Just something to "clinch the deal", so to speak! I do believe they've both had enough insecurity to last both their lifetimes. Something small yet traditional would suit them perfectly, I think. Thank you for asking (in another reply to a review)!
Author's Response: Well, seeing as you asked me so very nicely.. perhaps I can unearth a wedding... it's been a while since I wrote this story if I'm being honest, but I do have a special place in my heart for it, so perhaps a wedding is in order.... *runs after the plot bunny in haste* |
gesse83 | 2009.02.13 - 11:19AM | 21: Sunshine | Signed |
great, great story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I am so glad you enjoyed it! |
snape_submiss | 2009.02.13 - 08:56AM | 4: The Calm Before | Signed |
Oh, the cutting ... that was hard to read! I hope he can help her. :(
Author's Response: It was hard to write too, you know. But necessary! |
snape_submiss | 2009.02.13 - 08:52AM | 3: On The Edge | Signed |
Sad that she thought he had used her for sex - there was just a touch of disappointment in her, as if she expected better of him. Now maybe we'll find out why she's doing these things ...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for picking up on that. I wanted her to realise that not all men want just One Thing! |
snape_submiss | 2009.02.13 - 08:48AM | 2: Consequence | Signed |
Oh, ick - the description of the rapist had me creeped out from the get-go. I wonder why Severus has appointed himself her guardian? Will he take her to hospital or to his place? Will have to read on to see!
Author's Response: yes... he wasn't meant to be nice! lol.. and he got Severus's attention, right?? |
snape_submiss | 2009.02.13 - 08:44AM | 1: Encounter | Signed |
Wow - she didn't even take money from him! She must be in it to punish herself, then ... intriguing.
Author's Response: mmmm... keep going, answers are there in later chapters |
regs | 2009.02.13 - 07:48AM | 21: Sunshine | Signed |
This story just gets better and better!
Author's Response: Ahhh thank you so much! |
aliciana | 2009.02.13 - 06:13AM | 21: Sunshine | Signed |
Just lovely. So.....what's the bride wearing? You know so I don't clash. Lemons!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Where the hell did that expression come from? I'd never heard it before I started reading HP fanfic about four years ago.Must be something from "over the pond". Anyway, lemons were both sweet and tarty.....just how I like them. And even I (an old git of 46) can remember that feeling of being giddy and in love and lust. Beautifully written. I was in Hebden Bridge last weekend. That anywhere near you? Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Author's Response: ahhh yes... young lustful love... I remember that too!Mind you, at almost 41, I can still give mr neelix cause for concern..hehehe! Hebden Bridge...well, I come from York (the city...) so everywhere is Local from there I guess. :) Thanks for the review, and as for clashing with the bride, well.. I hate to disappoint you but I didn't write a wedding... perhaps I should, though. What do you think?? |
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